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Definately liking this. The way you had Naruto mature is gret and entirely believable. Please do update again soon!

i like!
it looks like you're gonna make sasuke work hard!!
nothing better than a desperate moody uchiha getting the stick up his butt removed XD

Hey great story. I hope you update soon! I really looking forward to it. Keep up the good work!

OI.......PLEASE OH PLEASE CONTINUE ON! I LOVE THIS SO FAR, AND AM SERIOUSLY BECOMING OBSESSED WITH IT. I LOVE HOW YOU'VE CREATED THE ADULT NARUTO.

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THat cliffhanger was evil!! please tell me what's gonna happen! Damn, woman! This story is goooooooddddd ! Me likes, a lot! nyan!! A heck of a lot! So please... update!!! I love this! Naruto is back with a splash! Your images are so incredibly vivid! nyan! nyan! Nyan! And Gaara... for once he is right! Sasuke doesnt deserve it... but I am a hardcore sasunaru fan... gods! the choice is yours to make, but I am sure I will be happy with the outcome any way... neji naru seems nice... never read it either... so ... bring it on, ne?

chose to review each chapter... this is too good to pass it up...so here goes... I loved chapter 1, it gave a good introduction to the situation... the letter and the anger and pain from Iruka's reaction was really impressive.. nyan... I really would have socked the Uchiha one if I'd received a letter like that... so yeah... it really got me pissed off...nyan! Leaving because of the Akatsuki... it was logical... Kakashi's loving gesture...that was really something... but 5 years! gosh!! Also, I loved the way you gave us the news that he'd gotten really powerful... imagine being able to slide inside the Hokage room without her notice... and iruka's reunion with Naruto... that was really something... nyan! This made me really happy... I keep on going back to the punch...nyan!! ^.^ This chapter was really goooooood!!! There arent enough words to tell you how much it pleased me!

Me again to talk about ch 2... Iruka and Naruto's conversation was really good... it let me see what had happened in the mean time... inside Konoha...nyah... and Sasuke's sadness... it was really tangible, nyah... Trust is something that's hard to regain once its betrayed... so yes, please... make him suffer before letting him get Naruto if he does at all... *vengeful grin* although... I really think the avenger needs a break... life hasnt been easy for him either, so his sense of right and wrong is a bit... skewered, ne?

Now, chapter 3 was really fun!!!! I loved the way you portrayed Naruto's reluctance to meet his friends and Gaara's haste to reach his friend. Their eagerness to meet and naruto's glompfest was really good. Genma's reaction to Naruto's body was funny... and Naruto's sexy teasing was even better... Gods! I was nursing a nosebleed and he was just teasing! I love this sexy, teasing fox you write about! Nyan!!! And its good the way he recognizes the problem that plagues his friend. Its good Gaara was able to forge good relations with his siblings...nyan... it really warmed my heart... so yes, write more?

awwwwwww cliff hanger?
Can I request the Naruto avoids Sasuke at the last minute and teleports? Just to heighten the tension please! Let him bump into skika/kiba/Sakura first (although maybe be a bit more reserved with Sakura, maybe he could be openly wistful and sad and tell her he won't chase after people anymore, that maybe someone else should have made an effort to keep the team together rather than just him. Sakura was only trying to save Sasuke and never the team as a whole.) By the way, this is the best naruto i've read so far, really captures the dual layer of naruto's character,(although i've always secretly wanted him to stand up for himself and refuse to take their belittling of him, maybe shoot back something that shows his hurt and shows some pride.) Anyways please continue this fic pretty please else I'll be forced to use 'convince nu jitsu!'(puppy dog eyes)

ps, please send an email when you update! I wanna see, asap!

Woah there! Gettin' gooood! Love the "Sasuke melting against the doorframe" thing! Hope Sakura rots in hell! Bwuahahahaha! *cough* Neway, keep em' coming! More Sasu\Naru action! ^_^