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Interesting chapter!
I like how you write Gaara's character ^^

Great 3rd chapter!!
And Naruto kissed Gaara on the nose. That's so sweet^^
Can't wait till Naruto meets Sasuke!
You definitely must keep up this story.

Yay, nice update. Can't wait for the next one. Naruto is so devious. :)

Wow, this was good! I applaud your first 2 chapters. I've always loved the premises where people start to appreciate Naruto's presence. I hope the teme will wise up this time and just do what his gut is telling him to do. Though i gotta say, a Hyuuga, a Nara, AND a Kazekage in the midst is quite interesting indeed...*gives evil laugh* Update soon!

I really like this :) It's quite a strong story, and very gripping so far. One little criticism I might highlight is your tendency to refer to Sasuke as "the raven" and Naruto as "the fox". You do it a bit too often and it kind of disrupts the flavour of the story. Once or twice is fine, but when I started noticing up to three "the raven"s per paragraph, I nearly forgot you were talking about a Ninja prodigy and not a black bird.

Colourful descriptors are all well and good, but try not to drive them into the ground and you'll have that much stronger of a fic for it.

Keep up the good work!

Interesting, I like the way you're picturing things. I'll keep an eye on this.

so far i like this very much! the way you picture naruto is pretty good. nice to read that he can be something else than a "dobe"
please keep it up and update soon!

Wow! I am speechless. The story is amazing, the writing is flawless, and the development perfectly constructed. I love the story and the plot line is one of my favorites. Even not knowing if this is a Naruto/Sasuke leaves me in a suspense that makes me crave your next installment or for have stumbled in the complete story. I praise you for your skills and the way you sip your tale. You are amazing!

Ok, that done...The unknown force pf course is Naruto, right? And are you implaying that Itachi is alive? I didnt get that part. Gaara is amazing...to be able to tell that Naruto was back at the village...That was great. Shikamaru a contender...mmm...I dont see him as one as he definetly* in my opinion, looks better oaired with a girl. I really want, crave, cheer for a Naruto/ Sasuke pairing in this fic. I dont like Sasuke thinking that much as he is kind of contamplating giving up on Naruto...He better get his act together once he sees that Naruto is back and that he has many rivals for the fox's love.

I loved Iruka. He socked him a good one! Hurray for Iruka-sensei! To see Iruka forseeing the upcoming battle for Naruto's affection was hilarious! I loved it! Lets see a lot more of this Iruka please!

In your next update please let us see the encounter between Naruto and Sasuke. I wonder how that is going to go down...Should Gaara interupt the encounter??? MMM...Do you have it already planned? Or better yet, have you wrote it already? Please update fast. Fast as by the end of this week, yes?

Well, I think that is all for now and I really hope to hear from you very, very, very soon! Oh, also, can you email me when you next update please? I mean, if you have an emailing list add me please! And if not, can you please create one? Please???? Thanks for a wonderful story!

Carla

Hey, I like your story. Can't wait for more. :p

oh, i am loving this, even if i don't know who the final pairing will be, though i have a strong hunch it's narusasu or sasunaru. unless that's just my very strong wish bleeding into my analysis. if you don't mind, who will be your final pairing? anyway, yeah, love it, update soon!