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by perfectionscat

person Surr
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, amazing! You write well. Liked how you didn't get too graphic.
I'm definitely reading you other pieces, too.
person xxdedxx
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooooo, i'm loving this story and the way you write, so utterly amazing. I could see every scene as it played out, that's talent my friend, well done :D
person kyuubigrl
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh wow. that was. really good. harsh and short but... really well written. the imagery and words you use were really moving. it's hard to read fics like this where sasuke does something like that, but i find it's really in his character. i always love that naruto giving in thing only to have sasuke rub it in his face. and i always love the idea of sasuke questioning sai as his replacement. great work!