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for Broken Seal

by Vague

person naru.uke.4lyf
schedule July 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg omg omg omg ch 3 was was was omg please update poor poor naru-chan
person blueinu
schedule June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thanks u so much for updating this story,it's one of my personal faves,and pray that u keep writing such great stuff.Not a huge fan of rape,but it might have been the best way for Gaara to meet Naruto...As it were.I sorta found the last chapter lacking depht is all it has plenty of chrisma and character and plot building but its too soon to tell how wonderful this story,i know,is going to turn out to be.Dont be disheartened im not saying this to be a mean just a critique,srry if it comes off being mean,it's not intentional at all.

Keep up the most excelllent work and hope to see more soon.Update as often as u can plz!I look forward to ur work.

person MysteriousStranger
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
KAWAII!!! This is so great! Update when you get teh chance! Yaya! ^^
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like this story. should be fun seeing how you plan on getting gaara to stick around long enough for any type of relationship to form. hmm. and narutos thoughts would be nice too.

gaanaru forever! hehe. =P
person Hello
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, I can't believe it. The people of Leaf are horrible. Please keep on updating! :( Such a shame. Hope you'll keep writing this. About Kakashi being Naruto's father threw me off, I personally thought it was Iruka! XD
person kawaiicrimsonkitsune
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You can't quit the story! Its awsome! You MUST continue it! If you don't I will cry.
person cirquegirl999
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this! This story has all of my favorite characters in important roles and my favorite pairing! I really like where you're going with this and I beg of you to continue! I only began reading this today and imagine my surprise to find out a story I really liked was going on hiatus! I'm so sad over it, please continue and if you have any more horrible reviewers then I'll beat them up for you, how's that?lol I can't beg you enough to continue this but could you find it within yourself to give this another shot? Please!
person lilithwolf
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i literally almost broke down and cried. but you simply must continue this story because it is so heartbreakingly beautiful.
lilithwolf@excite.com
person Raiten
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woot! go Gaara! update ASAP!!!!!!!!!!
person lilithwolf
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
waaah! i love it i love it I LOVE IT! and i simply cannot wait for you to write more! this is sooo cute! and if you need a beta, I offer my services.
km1429@txstate.edu