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Yay! A Gaara/Naruto fic! How exciting! *does little fangirl dance* I found your writing very good. Will definitely keep a close watch on this one.

OMG! I love it.

I thought it was going to be Iruka until the last few lines but... -Sniffles-

Write moooreee! Feed the bunny! -Points to a pink rabbit.-

OMG!!! Yay for Naruto and Gaara...I am so happy to see the small influx of Naruto and Gaara fics starting to trickle in on the site. I love this pairing, it is simply my OTP (one true pairing), and I squeal every time a new fic goes up.

I think this is a really good start, a bit short (that isn't a bad thing) to fully judge a fic on, but I am excited. I saw a few errors (but lordy my fics are riddled with them too, it is so difficult to catch your own errors). If you would like some help (I'm rather busy), but I'd love to offer my beta skills to you. As I said above, I miss error in my own fics a lot, but I'm pretty good about catching them in other's fics. If you would like an extra set of eyes to check your stuff just let me know (if it means I would get to read your chapters before anyone else it would soooo cinch that deal). I'm on the internet ALL the time, so just drop me a line (email is on my author's page)

Hmmmmm.... Your starting out good and when the summary said it had Shukaku and Kyuubi pairing and then it said it would have GaaraxNaruto pairing it caught my interest. I do hope you continue this and update soon. And you shouldn't be discouraged not to continue this just because you don't have many reveiws, don't forget about the people who have reveiwed it so far and how many actually read it. Cause people could like this but they just don't wanna reveiw. But I shall reveiw each chapter if you continue it ok ^^

KAKASHI?! Wow... you totally threw me through a loop on that one... I was SO possitive it was gunna be Iruka. LMFAO. I like this so far, your writing style is good, and... uh... yeah. I like it. n_n

I LOVE IT!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!^-^

Poor Naruto. It made me want to cry for him. Your a really good writter. Please update I must read more! And you better not quit or slow down on this cause usually every story I like either its really slow in updating or they just quit on it... So you better continue this!

You can't stop now, you have to keep going. Keep writing. You really aren't bad and your story isn't bad. There are some errors but nothing a good beta can't fix. Don't be discouraged. I'd suggest just finding yourself a good, qualified beta and you'll be fine. But even if you have trouble finding one right away you should still keep going.

You're not writting on Broken Seal anymore? But I really like this fanfic. Not only is it GaaNaru but it's original. And I love original. I'm on the edge of my seat, pretty please with sugar on top continue? =3