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for Icha Icha Paradise

by pieterscheeringa

schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I love it with a passion.
person Backlash
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There are many many things I can say about this. The first and most important is that this was the single greatest thing that I have ever read, seen, had the privlage of reading, ect. This goes to show why you are my favorite author and why I go nuts just thinking of how you can come up with this stuff. It's all just so damn good. It' just brings a tear to my eye, I'm serious thats tears on the keyboard not.... well you get the idea. I love this story, I love all of your stories, I love your writeing and I just have to say thank you for everything that you have done and wrote.

PS THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR ALL YOU HAVE DONE
person Church
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY WOOOOOHOOO!!!! I get the chance to read this great creation and also finish it in a long ass time! Words probably cant express how much i feel but ey im writing it alrdy so wat the hell. Kyuubi is my fav! :P such a hot bitch indeed amd Ayka dang if der was a pic of her or something id want to see that man and that titty fuck scene with her was out of thid world since she still had her top on. Tsunade in chocolate ho lee shiet who wulda thot of dat man? well you did but godamn it was good. The BDSM thing wiht Anko and Kurenai was way awesome since the way Anko serviced Naruto is a mmeorable scene embedded in my mind. the orgy was surprising hella long and good but whos complaining its a great scene. This story is beyond awesomeness and rocks my socks off to dust! id give this over the scoring scale over w/e it is! Nice job hope that in the future something like this will happen again from oyu!
person Church
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY WOOOOOHOOO!!!! I get the chance to read this great creation and also finish it in a long ass time! Words probably cant express how much i feel but ey im writing it alrdy so wat the hell. Kyuubi is my fav! :P such a hot bitch indeed amd Ayka dang if der was a pic of her or something id want to see that man and that titty fuck scene with her was out of thid world since she still had her top on. Tsunade in chocolate ho lee shiet who wulda thot of dat man? well you did but godamn it was good. The BDSM thing wiht Anko and Kurenai was way awesome since the way Anko serviced Naruto is a mmeorable scene embedded in my mind. the orgy was surprising hella long and good but whos complaining its a great scene. This story is beyond awesomeness and rocks my socks off to dust! id give this over the scoring scale over w/e it is! Nice job hope that in the future something like this will happen again from oyu!
person the big cheese
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my giddy aunt, that took me two weeks to read through, and just to make it clear my penis is happy with your performance, my penis is also saying that he would like you to keep up the good work ^^

Now poor Flossy's dead and never called me mother
person cpotaylor
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
my god man. couldn't have split it up at least a little it took me 2 hours to read this and im a speed reader, but otherwise it was an excellent story that you have written. good job!
person kane
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is one of your best works yet. Long, good plot, and good writing. It's great
person diadia
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
your story is WAAAAY too long and sucks ass dude
person kyuub92
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
U R A GOD !!!!!

Only thing that i could find wrong with this holy tome of porn is, its a bit to big, making it in to su chapters would b easier to break read. It took me over a week to finsh the incomplete version... Please finsh the story. I need my fix man !!!!
person Seraph
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The only problem with this fic/orgy is the grammar. Now if you will excuse me, I must take care of all this white "paint"