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for Icha Icha Paradise

by pieterscheeringa

person The
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holly shit man, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! this shit was fucking genius, sweet moses this thing was good. took me like two full days to read this beast, its like 3:24 in the morning right now and my god, i dont even know how to word my thoughts. all i know is that this shit was a genius, hot, sexy, and extra long piece of sweet sweet smut. i thank you for taking however much time it took you to make this, i know it had to be a shit load of time, thanks. ahhhh!!!! now i really want to read an real Icha Icha Paradise (if only it were a real book). anyways i fucking loved reading this thing, the whole dirty talking.....*throws away tissue*....every scene, there wasnt even like a break of like the boring dialogue or filler stuff that would be between each scene it was all like ah fuck me and nut on my face-scene change- i want to fuck you now and all that, im pretty sure you have caused ATLEAST three orgasms per reader on this one, not to mention i will probably take some info out of this for some ideas, the whole Role playing seems kinda sexy. yes you get many thumbs up and as many stars as possible on this one, keep the good work up man cause you have a fan for life now, he he yerp stay up

-The Don

P.S. i just now realised that this story is probably why you havent been updating your other stories on FF lately, though i cant be mad since this masterpiece was realease he he oh well. good day
person LinkTheLethalLlama
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mien Gott! This is so freaking long! Great, but long!
person 89
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW. that was the most kickass story ever. i can honestly say that you are THE BEST fanfic writer out there. I don't know how you got so many ideas for such a long story, but props out to you man, you got MADSKILLZ.
person bait you in
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
now this what I call and story.
person Derek
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
words can't express what I feel for this one, thats it I'm completely and absolutely speachless.

I also think that Ayame should be next on the collection list
person Reikson
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

This is the longest, but sweetest, piece of smut I've ever read.

Anything and everything gets explored here!

THIS FIC IS A PERVERT'S PARADISE!
person Anon
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was hot and I came like a pig. Will you PLEASE do a fic featuring Naruto/Tsume/Hana/ or Naruto/Tsume?
person Anon
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love you, man. you are the messiah. i love you, dude. gimme a hug!
person Vassago
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey Demon, well, I'm at one-third of the story, and so far so good :D. I really like the story line, well, that's all I had to say, so I'm gonna continue reading.

Cheers,

Vassago
person Yo
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
happy birthday!