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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it you are my god master it's got great story to it and i really love it.
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December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story a lot, and i think that u make good storys and i will wait with held breath for the next chapter of your story's
by the way i think that you are a fantastic auther
cant wait to read more:)
by the way i think that you are a fantastic auther
cant wait to read more:)
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy Shit....... Damn, I can't believe how long this is... If there was any work of fiction that deserved the title Icha Icha paradise, this is the one... All hail DGOC, king of hentai!
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As im writing this I haven't started to read it yet, but knowing the quality you've done in the past I know it will be good. But DAMN, you weren't kidding when you said it was gonna be big. Maybe when you decide to finish your Naruto pairings for good you could do a gigantic summer blockbuster like this. You know go out in style and before I forget. . .Happy B-day
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loove it. Been a long time fan just never got around to review any stories. Happy B-Day. oh and *Starts bowing "We're not worthy!We're not worthy!"
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap...
I had wondered why you seemed to drop off the face of the earth for a while and thought you were on holiday... not writing this hentai magnum opus... This even puts you other collection of stories to shame.
If this is Icha Icha... no wonder Kakashi blushed and giggled all the time this was great
Thank you for writing
I had wondered why you seemed to drop off the face of the earth for a while and thought you were on holiday... not writing this hentai magnum opus... This even puts you other collection of stories to shame.
If this is Icha Icha... no wonder Kakashi blushed and giggled all the time this was great
Thank you for writing
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good, like I said before but I forgot to ask, will there be a bigger epilouge. It would be awesome to see OrochiMarU react to his daughters consort. It would also be nice to read of Kohonas terrible destruction.