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December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! Very hot!! It really got me excited here--I'm hoping you add a chapter 2. Wow--dirty, dirty Itachi! Lots of interesting potential--I'm hoping Iruka and Kakashi find out and prosectute Itachi, but are ok with Naruto and Sasuke---but of course, you are the author! More, more, please! Thanks for sharing!
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December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...O-O That was very smexy! well written as well. Please! Please write a second chappy! Sasuke have to teach more of itachi game to nartuo! lol itachi had train sasuke well in the art of...umm... this game. yea. So yea. great first chap!
writer in training,
Shadow.Jinxs aka Deidara fan girl aka anmine art teacher
writer in training,
Shadow.Jinxs aka Deidara fan girl aka anmine art teacher
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its so wrong, but feels so right. hahaha I love sasunaru!
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty hot
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my freakin gosh that was so damn hot, I love a greedy Sasuke getting down on innocent Naruto. SEQUEL PLEASE!!!!!!
OOH! And the sequel after that should be when Naruto, Sasuke, and Itachi play together...
OOH! And the sequel after that should be when Naruto, Sasuke, and Itachi play together...
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December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!! I'm so turned on now!!! I GTG but I wanna read more... Too bad it's done for now.
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December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nicely written. its very innocent but sexy at the same time. I look foreward to your future fics. keep up the good work.