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by crimson

schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you should continue this story i mean like seriously you should continue this story
person Pastel
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Neji is very forceful isn't he? Nice story.
person Firepower
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked this a lot. Please continue.
person Kilrath
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you didn't have to change the title, though this title could work a little better for the story
person Kilrath
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is sounding a bit interesting but i do have one complaint. Its with the title, Hinata and Neji are not siblings, they are cousins. Hinata is the heir to the leader of the main house and Neji is in a smaller house that is required to protect them. Sorry but there are some things that just anny me a bit.