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by oraday

person gaara89
schedule August 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please continue soon!
person seraphym
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love NeijiGaara! I like Tsunade's plotting in this one! I would really love to have it continue and see more about Sasuke's and Naruto's relationship and healing and some NeijiGaara smut as well!
person beth
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww!!! that was an excellent three chapters! I so hope there is more! I loved it!
person Deidara
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really love your other story 'Fraternity'... mainly for your NejiGaara smut.
Its funny how I liked the SIDE pairing moreso than the main one in that fic.

Well, this story was no different for me, absolutely love the smut and the way you made it in-character and making Gaara into a respectable uke.(you're so awesome xD)

Keep up the great NejiGaara smut, your work's probably the biggest reason I started to like that pairing as a VERY close second to SasuNaru.

=3
person Hestia
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved your last chapter--I do hope you update a bit--I like the subplot you have going with Naruto and Sasuke. And Gaara in RED MESH!!! Hot! By the way, thanks for your review of my story--but back to praising this one--I liked how you had Gaara so agressive and uke--awesome! It was so sweet when Sasuke defended Naruto also. Great stuff! Thanks!
person Hestia
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this pair! (I wrote one too). I love Kakashi giving sex ed--and Gaara as a dominant uke--oh yes, please, a lemon??? please??
Love all the references to Neji's hair! I like the scene were Neji wakes up Gaara, and Gaara telling Temari he hates Neji's hair! I like it all to be honest, but I'm trying to point out the best parts here. You know you don't have to settle for 3 chapters . . .
Love it so far! Thanks for sharing!
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so cool! More please!! I promise to give out cookies, nyan!!
person Cindy
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
luvin it~!

more... pls
person Yukino
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Geez! Gaara really IS deprived! I keinda feel bad for him. Haha well, lets just hope they don't start molesting
each other at dinner *silently hopes they do*. *squeal* Gah!! I just LOVE NejiGaa!! It's just too cute!! BTW, I
love your pairings. And your story. And everything else about this! *huggles story* I love your story, please
update soon! I know you wanted this to be a three-shot, but I think this might be able to go farther than that!

*/_\*
person lo
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fun, and nicely done. I liked the whole sex-ed thing, that was funny.