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by nitesintodreams

person Tepee712
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it, its depressing that Sasuke has a big disadvantage, you know, being dead and all. lol But i like the plot and i'm intereseted to see what role is naruto's father going to play. PLus I wonder how Sasuke is going to be reacting to naruto and Sai's kisses, looking forward to your next chapter! you know what came to mind thought. There was this movie, I saw way back between 13-15 years or more, dont remember the name, but it was about an old man who fell in love with this woman, but he dies. She liked him, but I dont know to what extent. Anyway his spirit is hanging around, and he notices that she falls in love with this dickhead of a guy. Anyhow, the guy drowns, and the old man's spirit took over the mans body. I don't know how I felt about the movie, I never saw the ending. I think to some level I was disturbed. Anyway, just wanted to share that. haha. it has nothing to do with the plot but your story reminded me about it.
person Anon
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still love it!
person animehead
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! I just wantto squeal in delight! It's so addicting. I look forward to your update. You are so awesome!!!
person XZanayu
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! That was a great chapter!! Hurry with the next one!!
person ClosetEmo
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
How could anyone hate this chapter it was brill!Kiba was so funny going from one car door to another like that how dumb can ya get??LOL.I love the way Sasuke and Narutos relationship is coming along it was so sweet when Sasuke was talking to Naruto in his sleep also when Naruto drove off leaving Sasuke alone was sad...which makes me wonder how this could ever have a happy ending maybe it will be a bittersweet ending.The ending to this chapter was a bit of a cliffhanger what the hell is Narutos father doing there well I guess I will find out next chapter so if ya can update soon please!!

Merry Christmas!
person darktoy
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
To be completely honest, I believe this fanfic is worth to give a shot. So far we had humor, angsty and a loooooooooooots of supernatural events. Either way...

UPDATE SOON!
person rachael
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH wow! I love it! I really, really love the dynamic that you're building with Naruto and Sasuke--and the fact that Naruto can see the dead? Brilliant! 365 days of kisses for Sai, woot (for Sai). I don't really like Sai, but that just seemed so Sai-like that I'm just eating it up. And I liked how Naruto and Sai say goodnight to each other.

Do you know, when Sasuke comes floating up through the window, I was expecting him to possess Sai's body and molest Naruto, but I like what you did much better. Are the ghosts going to be possess bodies? I'm very interested to see where you are going to go with this. And Naruto's dad is an angel? Interesting, interesting. It adds more mystery as to why Naruto is so mad at him because if he made angel, he couldn't've been all bad, right? It makes me wonder if he got shipped off to the funny farm or something, leaving Naruto to grow up all alone and Naruto became very resentful because of it.

O.o It isn't going to turn out that Sasuke knew Naruto's dad in life and that's why he feels a connection to Naruto, is it?

I'm really excited about this story. I haven't been this excited about a story in a while. Hey, hey! Maybe it could be like a Beauty and Beast story: GHOST EDITION!! Like Naruto's dad makes a deal with Sasuke that if he can Naruto to fall in love with him, then Sasuke will get a second chance at life. But Sasuke, being the bastard that he is, is going to just keep pissing him off, (like how Beast just keeps scaring and yelling at Belle), but then something dramatic will happen (like the wolf attack on Belle) and things are going to turn around, except then there will some sort of angsty twist which makes it look like Sasuke+Naruto doesn't stand a chance...gasp! Like Naruto IS falling for Sasuke but he's sad because he can never be with Sasuke...so he hooks up with SAI! (duh, duh, duh). Like a consolation prize, ya' know. Sasuke is heartbroken and lets Naruto go because he loves him, and the proverbially last petal on the rose is falling, falling, falling...

Let's not forget that Naruto, Shino, and Kiba have some sort of boss! So maybe after Sasuke leaves Naruto alone, he goes back to the house only to discover that Tayuya, Jiroba, and all the rest are getting captured Ghostbuster style, and he tries to save them (because even though he's letting Naruto go, he doesn't want to be alone, right, right?) but then he gets captured too. And there will some sort of lab and the boss figure will be working on sending the ghosts to the other side or whatever.

Then Naruto will have a revelation or epiphany that he has to see Sasuke except he goes to the house and everyone is gone, and he doesn't know what to do, and it's all looking very hopeless, and...and!

Well, I guess I'll just have to wait and see.

XD YOU ROCK!!

I hope you update soon, and I apologize for my ramblings.

Keep up the awesome work.

rachael
person Carmen
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
weee! really nice story so far! plz upload the next chappy as far as ur fingers can get on the keyboard :P
person dace
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
loved it! when will there be more?
person Amber
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Cliffhanger...No...But it's a great story so far and I love it! ^_^