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for Seeing is Believing

by nitesintodreams

person Savin-me
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
With each chapter I’m getting more and more in love with your Kiba, he’s so adorable XD
Like the previous chapter this one was hilarious too from Kiba trying to scare every soul away from the van and Sasuke’s kind of way to ‘warm up’ the blond XD
I liked the idea that you made Naruto the special one, but still I wonder how they will be together if they ever will. Also I’m curious about Naruto dad (about that angel thing) and was he able to see the ghosts too? Why Naruto has a fear/phobia for the death ones and something about not wanting to become a monster. Is it because his dad is dead? ^^"

Waiting for the update! ^^
person Tara
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AAARRRRGH!!! Naruto's father is an....an....ANGEL!! KAKOII!! KAWAII!!! I LOVE THIS STORY. I SHOULD STOP SCREAMING NOW....Okay, it's out of my system. Oh my gosh though! I love this story and there's only two chapters of it! Think how much I'll feel when there's ten more chapters of it tomorrow for me to read? *hint-hint* lol.
You're really talented. And I love the role Sai is playing. Sai x Naru is one of the few pairings in yaoi that I like, it's coo'. I was, though, hoping for some Neji x Naru? Hmm...Maybe Sasuke might try to kill him if he came any close to Naruto.

And Kiba, lmao! He gives me bare jokes, you give me bare jokes coz, y'know, you write the story and everything is your idea. I loved this bit:

"Sayanora mother fucker" -I couldn't stop laughing muh ass off! My friend threatened to shut off the computer if I didn't shut up and he ended up giving me some form of CPR because I'd choked on the piece of chicken-wing I was currently eating! That was not pleasant.

But dare I assume that Naruto's father is Arashi? And he has a brilliant halo? And long golden hair? And his wings glow? And why does Naruto dislike his father? aww Naru-chan, that's not very nice of you!

I'll be back in 24 hours and - by jove! If you have not added, I'll be highly upset. And what's this nonesense about people not liking your story? If everyone was aware of it, I bet you you'd probably have more than a hundred reviews and it's only been two chapters. Sadly, there are many stories here that scream for attention because they are really good. For example, if I don't mark my favorite stories, I lose track of them and end up reading a new one. They are constantly being added.
But don't worry, I'll definately mark this one! coz I luuuurrrve it!

*dreamily sighs* I'm in love...
(24 hours, gurlie, 24 hours).

Yes you gotta work your fingers to the bone! Oh yes you gotta work your fingers to the bone. Yes you gotta work your fingers....to the booooooooo-oooh-ooooone!!! *voice cracks* a-hem! e-hem! sorry about that. I just love that classical! Anywayz, i'm not rushing you. Work at your own pace. I'm just merely hinting at the fact that I'd like it very very ver very much if you updated soon!

Tara
person SharinganEyes
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hate! Hate!
Omg that's not even an idea in my head! I loves this chapter, really i did, poor Sasuke he must have been so sad when naruto left!
But he followed him, oh...oh its wonderful?! Omg and the ending -gasp- but wait...he doesn't want to be like 'him' it's not his dad right? cause him seemed so sad about his dad..so is it someone else? man, and Sai! Mwhahaha I love Sai, give them hell kid! You get ur year worth of kisses! Now you...you type.

Type like you've never typed before, I have questions! Questions only you can answer, like how did Sai save Naruto?! and what happen to naruto's dad? And like why can Naruto do that things that he does?! and who the hell is 'him' omg, i'll be a ghost if you don't update!

Hate, tch don't be troublesome...I love your story so work!
person Random crazy fangirl
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW this iz good REALLY REALLY GOOD how could you even think people would hate this??!!

Kiba is just sooo amazing in this I LOVE HIM!!!
I hope there will be more Rock Lee in the future because I love him too.

As for Sai..well im not much of a fan of his so I hope this dosent change into a Sai and Naruto story because I love my Sasu and Naru.But I know whatever happens this is gonna be a great story and I LOVE the fact the chapters are long that means the longer I can spend reading and enjoing this AMAZING story!!!

Update soon pleeeeeeeeeease!!

person Naru_seme
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter! Loved it! Can't wait to see what happens next! Please hurry and update soon!
person Passing Reader
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg! What a strange plot twist!!!! But I thought Naruto's dad was a 'monster' so why would he be surrounded in glowing light like an angel? Is that in the next chapter? Cant wait to see, waiting for your next update, ja! ;p
person Too lazy to think of a name~
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think it's funny how Sai and Naruto are roomies. That made me giggle and squee like a fangirl. The ending was very cute. Hope you write the next chapter soon! This is a really nice story. The music choices for the van thing had me laughing really hard. Nice job, and update soon!
person Kristen
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm...Why does Naruto hate his father again? Or am I just being a n00b and this is going to be reveiled in the story sometime in the distant future?
person Disgraceful_soul
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Love the first part of the story ^^ Nice job with this, if you haven't have no beta yet, I'd love to do it ^^ Correcting grammar and such is like a habit, so I wouldn't mind doing. But up to you ^^ Happy Holidays! Can't wait to read more! Ja ne!
person amychan
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that i love this story, even from just the prologue! I would love to be your beta since i really have to much time on my hands anyway!

Please update soon, and email me the next chapter if you want (*wink wink*)!