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for In the shadows

by shadeoftroll

person death906
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHOOOO! More! This is such a great Crack pairing! if there is a sequal...<.< >.> Do it! -waves pom poms- Go you, go you, go you!
person yuki
schedule January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...............i love it.......o.o
very good descriptions
although the ending was pretty sudden and out there o.o
other than that.......................<3!
person ShadowofLight
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ROFLAO omg what have u two done?! oh poor iruka!! what is it with mothers dressing their sons like girls when they have no daughters of their own? ^^ anyway about damn time, Ibiki!! though, I couldn't help but laguh myself almost sick. though i do hope you doa sequel! i mean what about naruto's reaction to his parent finally finding someone? not to mention how kakashi would tkae iruka being off the market smirks then falls over laughing* ow my side is splitting!!!
person Cindy
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
clap! clap!

How about Gai/Kakashi???? Or Shika/Asuma?
person ZeldaFitz
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful. I'm so sad it's over, but thrilled that you're considering a sequel, or something else. You two write so well together. I'd love to see Kakashi, Asuma, Genma and Raidou try to carry on after losing their Iruka, maybe by searching for love themselves in all kinds of interesting places. Thank you for a great read!
person pumking
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
is it me or does iruka have a thing for blowing shit up?...sweeeet...lol!
person wouldnt-u-like-2-no
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEEE! so cute!*hugs*
person Evol
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh...its gonna get interesting when naruto shows up huh! hehe...so does sasuke have a crush on naruto still or is it just a brother thing? is neji dating anyone?
person stolen
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol! mistress sakura! lol jealous shino!
i swear i was thinking about what would ahppen if sakura had seen shino in the pjs and then i read the last bit and i cracked up!lol!
damn, and when u said racconed eyed i started thinking gaara and nearly died in my chair.
person sneere
schedule January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
eek...and what does kakashi think of all this? if i recall kakashi was the one who said those who betray their friend are the worst kind of schum. and sasuke did near kill naruto.
the fact that the traitor he trained is now being raised by the love he lost to a romantic rival...eek! oh well at least gais on there side!lol!
and why hasnt sakura been by to say hi?
btw, im a leesakura fan but the shino sakura is tolerable because the rest of this story jsut rox so much ass!