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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay! thank u for updating! marry me! have my babies!
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh--I love what you did with Ibiki's cock--and Iruka's reaction to it--totally awesome! And Ibiki teaching Sasuke--yea! Of course, Kakashi should a bit too, but I love it--father and son bonding! This chapter was excellent! Selfishly I hope this story goes to twenty chapters--I love it! I'd write more, but I'm going to go back and reread this one again, this time to savour it . . .
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Silly me I just now found the review button or else I would have done it a while ago. I love thi pairing a lot because its just so original and you better believe I tried finding more but sadly you are a visionary that hasn't been mimiced yet so there were none. keep up the good work for all your adoring fans
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January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another great chapter. I loved the jealousy bit between Ibiki and Gai. Sasuke calling them Okaasan and Otousan is sweet, and I especially liked how protective Iruka got over his Ibiki when he saw his scars -- makes you wonder about the circumcision. Ouch! What can I say that I haven't already said? I love this fic. You could make it 50 chapters and I'd read every one.
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ROFLAO do you realize how much I've laughed reading this?? Oh it was really good don't get me wrong, i luved it but i'm picturing it in my head and i can't help but burst out laughing! i luv it, the picture perfect family ^^ and hey, you have to have at least ONE set of embaressing pjs. I have 3 sets! ^^ man, three dominating mistresses. eee i luv it! more soon plz! oh yeah, iruka is cruel when it comes to threats and i honestly don't blame ibiki and gai when it came to lube :p
Good Bye 2006 and Hello 2007!!!
Good Bye 2006 and Hello 2007!!!
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just love that "mother" bit so much. It actually made me facepalm, but shino and neji falling down afterwards saved you from the title of "overly cheezy". Sigh, and the shopping for lube was brilliantly done. It really is that awkward in those places, and the idea of Gai wearing a collar for mistress Anko made me squee. And the Goth kid's assumption that they were a gay couple ^-^.It makes me wonder that if they were, who would top?
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my god, that was just too much fun ^^ The part with Ibiki and Gai in the sex store, a work of genius, not to mention the long-johns part. I must say though the bitch talk freaks me out a bit, but everyone has different taste I guess. You write well so keep going, for my sake and probably many others.
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you!! I love the family!!! (the line about his bitch and his pup--oh pure gold!) Love Gaara as a goth at the porn store--awesome!
Lots of great moments in this chapter--wow--the sex the boys overhear--awesome; The mistress sakura and anko--fun and kinky; the scene in the lube shop--funny; the pajamas--oh so cute; Iruka protecting his son and the embrace with Sasuke--awww, so adorable. Oh and Ibiki taking those two home! God that kitchen scene--sorry, this review is terminated--I must go reread, need Ibiki/Iruka smut now . . .
Lots of great moments in this chapter--wow--the sex the boys overhear--awesome; The mistress sakura and anko--fun and kinky; the scene in the lube shop--funny; the pajamas--oh so cute; Iruka protecting his son and the embrace with Sasuke--awww, so adorable. Oh and Ibiki taking those two home! God that kitchen scene--sorry, this review is terminated--I must go reread, need Ibiki/Iruka smut now . . .
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you've outdone yourselves! This was an awesome chapter. It had a bit of everything and all so good. The lemon was great, and even funnier when the boys overheard it. The Sasuke/Iruka moments were so sweet, Ibiki-papa and Iruka-mama and the bit about Sasuke's new mommy -- loved it. Lube shopping was inspired (poor Gai), and poor Neji and Shino, too. I would love to see them in their cute jammies, too precious. It was over too soon and now I have to wait again. Aw, man...
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YES, I missed you - more, more~!