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for In the shadows

by shadeoftroll

person randomgrl13
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well, its about time someone wrote somthing other than kaka/iru, i hate that pairing! this one is so sweet... and full of crack so i love it! but are u gonna put sasuke with naruto when he gets back? cause that would kinda ruin it...
person eve4mem
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was not expecting that. I thought it was going to be Naruto you know like a surpirse visit. But with the odd pairing I really shouldn't let things like this sneak up on me. It's great of course hope to see more soon.
person ShadowofLight
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Do you realize how happy I was to come back home from holidays only to find not one, not two, but three new chapters? I laughed, I cried, I nearly made a mess all because of you two. I love it all and I like how Sasuke doesn't act like he had a below-zero icicle permanently glued up his ass. I was scared for a sec at the end of ch 8 and when I read 9 I was like 'Whoa.' Didn't see that coming that's for sure! I live this fic, and I hope you two continue it soon. I'm in mourning for Iruka's lacey garments but he can always get some more--or walk around butt-naked. Ooh I know Ibiki would jsut love that. I gotta go but hey, you two are by far the best writers around. I'm so glad you two decided to share this with us :)
person eve4mem
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was an evil cliffie. Who is it? I can't wait to find out. And poor Iruka still in his pink hope the mystery guest don't mind.
person Cindy
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOL~! Wonderful crack complete with the best pairing and !!smut!! - what more could a fangirl want? Is that Naruto with a kunai at Iruka's throat???

THANKS! :O
person Hestia
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Two new chapters--awesome! God--wild, crazy, silly, funny, kinky chapters--and no anal sex yet even--impressive! I hope the kunai holder is Naruto! I hope Ibiki succeeds in his romantic deflowering plan!
person Hestia
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, it's a family!!! And Iruka burnt his underwear! Another great one!
person ZeldaFitz
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I suppose I should have seen that coming. Ibiki is just a big teddy bear. I like the way you portrayed Sasuke, letting us see his softer, actually human side. So much for quiet, romantic evenings, especially when Naruto returns. Loved this chapter. (Does Gai LIKE snakes?)
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
holy shit! where the hell did naruto come from? LOL. damn, ibiki is in for the scariest interogation of his life ever.
person Stacy
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That has to be Naruto...right!!! Oh I can't wait to find out....so please hurry! While I'm waiting I have to get a tissue for my nose bleed!