rate_review Reviews

This was pretty darn good. You have a very good writing style, not to rushed, and very full of detail. Normally I'm not a huge fan of modern Naruto fics, but this one is kind of growing on me. Keep it up!!

>_< Oh dear God Pleaze!! Don't torture Me like this! I NEED to know what happens PLEAZE continue. PLEASE!!!

First off, i just want to say I LOVE your writing. I come for the smut but get sidetracked by the story instead, well done. that's a testament to how good ur stories are. Also, i was a big fan of Grind and im sad u dicontinued it. Good NarutoXSakura fics are hard to find, w/ smut or not, as most people hate her or pair her up w/ sasuke. This in mind, this is a great fic and i look forward to reading this through to completion (please finish this one...*.*).

Good luck w/ the romance and eventual smut, and i hope u update soon and frequently. (i can never get enough of a story until i read it thru to the end -_- )

best of luck,
KF

(P.S. i dont think most people really care how long a chapter or story is as long as its good. Another 10 pages is nothing, so keep em long and in-depth ^_^ [chibi KF sends huggles and stars])

you doubt that a reader would like more of such a great story?!?!?! you are crazy!

a bit cliche, don't you think? However, decisions such as that are entirely up to you. Mayhap you have a goal for all of this, mayhap you don't. However, this setup already predisposes it to predictability, the downfall of many otherwise good stories. I would suggest that you carefully consider how you might be able to veer this story off the traditional track, so to speak, so as to maintain this fic's excellence. Other than some minor issues with comma usage and placement, this piece is thus far shaping up nicely.

Looking forward to future developments

how could you stop there!!!!! i love your story please update soon.....will we know about sakura and naruto's heartbreak from the first chapter?

What a great chapter. I love the amnesia bit, it's always a good plot line. I can't wait for the next chapter. Good job, and a great Christmas Present.

Personally I wouldn't have minded another ten pages, but I guess this is a good stopping point for now. I'm curious juts how much of her memory was gone and how far Naruto is willing to go to help her. Update soon!

how could you stop there!!!!.....its ok, naruto/sakura stories are better when they have plot mixed in with smut :)....how old is narutos kid?...did he already have him when naruto first met sakura...who's the mom? please dont say hinata...make up a character that would be best i cant see naruto with anyone else from the show except sakura.........well please update as soon as possible please and keep up the good work

THAT WAS AWSOME, KEEP IT UP!!!!