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for Finding Destiny

by animechick262003

person benn454
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sucks that you deleted Grind, but this fic is pretty damn good so far, so it's ok. I think the modern touch and making Naruto an erotica writer was pretty cool. First fic I've read with that premise; I've been reluctant to read AU fics, but after reading this one, I think I could get into them. Keep up the good work!
person solar phoenix
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice AU so far. Keep up the good work and update soon!
person Anon
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was amazingly good.
person fooxie
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! Your still alive!!! yay......im so happy that you are still continuing to write stories, ur an amazing writer and your stories are full of interesting drama....anyways i hope you will repost "suddenly daddy" as long with the last chappie....it's been so long since the hiatus as well as the stupid comment made by the contest people.....their stupid for not understanding creative writing.....anyways you should definitely post your story on fanfiction.net i think mature content is allowed plus you will definitely get traffic and reviews for that story!!! Take care....hope you will post soon ^-^
person Wrathchylde
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Grind is a tough loss. I was really getting into it but alas. This has the same style and feel to it so I should say it will be great. I'm one of the few who prefers an innocent Sakura but that's not going to stop me here. Cheers.
person Josh
schedule December 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like how it starts out but it was a bit confusing... I hope you clear up your future chapters a bit more would be much appreciated and I like how it all rolls along... But how does Naruto and Sakura meet up again that is keeping me on end..... JTB8834@aol.com if you ever want to talk don't be shy to say hi and keep up the good work
person poornmiserable
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this there are never enough naruto/sakura fics on this site especially those that contain smut....im sad to hear you will not continue grind i liked that fic as well...keep up the good work and upsate soon
person Hey
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn u deleted grind?!?! thats been on my waiting list to read for a long time now!!

oh well, at least i have this story to read now! keep up the good work, i cant wait for the next chapter!
person Remusss
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aww cute story, please update soon!
person adult.sakura
schedule December 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That's a good start for a new fic...
Still...Why have you deleted "Grind"?? 0.0 I know guys were looking to read the next chapters, and now you quitted. Would you resume it? You'd better do)))))))))))))) everyone will be pleased ;)