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June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the story, and how you've dealt with the plot.
I'm willing to beta, all I need is the bit you want me to edit.
And, yes, I noticed several errors in previous chapters, but, as you have been including as an A/N, you lacked a beta.
If you need to bounce ideas off me, feel free. I've got plenty to bounce back, and sometimes the rebound is awesome in itself.
I'm willing to beta, all I need is the bit you want me to edit.
And, yes, I noticed several errors in previous chapters, but, as you have been including as an A/N, you lacked a beta.
If you need to bounce ideas off me, feel free. I've got plenty to bounce back, and sometimes the rebound is awesome in itself.
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is amazing! All my fav characters in different pairings than i'm used to reading. Very nice. I'm excited to read more so please keep going!
Cheers
Cheers
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February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please continue this soon...
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July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG i love this you should write more because its really good and...yeah i wanna read more becuase you have such a good start at it i coulnt stop readding, well i hope you write more because i'm kinda well ok i'm looking forward to reading some more hehe
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July 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I love how the characters interact with each other. I can't wait to see what Shika's mother means by, "I know you think Kakashi is your friend… But he’s a Hatake, and no Hatake has ever brought the Naras anything but pain." I love your story! Hope you update soon!
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April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh yay!
What a hot chapter. I love this fic.
Heh. Genma and Neji 'finally' did it. So cute and sexy and.. aah.. Neji has a naughty fantasies? Ohh la la ! Ay Caramba! xDDD Heh.
By the way.. Is Neji going to tell Shika and Gaara about his.. long and hot night?
I hope you update soon.
Great fic. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
~Tyra
What a hot chapter. I love this fic.
Heh. Genma and Neji 'finally' did it. So cute and sexy and.. aah.. Neji has a naughty fantasies? Ohh la la ! Ay Caramba! xDDD Heh.
By the way.. Is Neji going to tell Shika and Gaara about his.. long and hot night?
I hope you update soon.
Great fic. I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
~Tyra
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April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW! What a wonderful read!! Just finished chapter 7 and still wanting more. :D Originally, I'm a huge NaruSasu and KakaIru fan, but after I started reading your fic, I'm converted. I can't wait to read more of your future chappies. It's absolutely great! I especially LOVE your Neji and Genma here. So HAWT! Keep up the great work and thanks so much for sharing! :)
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April 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well you took long enough! :D
I really liked this chapter. I mean, Neji and Genma.. -drool- Heh, they were so sexy.
I can't wait to see how Shika reacts when he finds out.. If he finds out. xD
And poor Shika.
OMG. I hope you update soon. Sexy story.
I really liked this chapter. I mean, Neji and Genma.. -drool- Heh, they were so sexy.
I can't wait to see how Shika reacts when he finds out.. If he finds out. xD
And poor Shika.
OMG. I hope you update soon. Sexy story.
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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So, I'd totally be your beta...I hope you keep writing, and that Gaara gets love! I love Neji, he is so sad and lonely in his cage and needs lurve and lots of it!
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February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the first KakashixShika fic I've ever read, and I rather enjoyed it! Though there are some grammatical errors and gaps of flow, it is still interesting enough to read despite that! Good luck on the completion of this; I'm anxious to see where all these relationships lead!