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Yay! You updated so soon!
Heh. And Shika finally moved?
Keep writing and update soon. I love the Shika/Kakashi, it's the main pairing, but still I would like to see some Neji/Genma, too(even thought it's just a side pairing)..
Not that I'm complaining, no! All I wish is that you would update soon again, and continue this awesome fic! :)

OMG! i love it, i first seen it in the pedo or hentai section (not sure what it is ^ ^|) and there were only three chapters. Well, consider me highly surprised when i saw it in M/M section! this tale of unsure love is really great, I don't think Kaka-chan was ooc in chap 6, i would feel a little out of it if i were in his shoes. I can't wait until the next chapter comes out! Keep up the good work!

Oh--I love Kakashi with fangs--that was one of my early theories about Kakashi's mask! The other scar is interesting too--so I guess we'll get the story at some point! Wow Iruka and Gaara--AWESOME!!!! Two of my favorite characters--why didn' it ever occur to me they should have sex??

I LOVE THIS FIC.!! I've never thought about these pairings (or that i would actually like them) hope you update soon

Heey!
Good chapters! The chapter four was interesting. I also liked this chapter.
Poor Gaara, he has so miserable past. Good that he has Neji and Shika his friens now.
Thought the chapters aren't very long, thay are still good. And I can't wait to read more.
Update soon !

The story id good and well written, even though you have some spelling mistakes.
Please continue it as I am starting to like it. ^^

Great, interesting story~! Can reviews make you write longer too? ;)

Hi! I'm glad you weren't upset about my Gemna/Neji backstory. I've been off aff for a while for Xmas, so it was a nice to return to TWO chapters!!! I like the love bite on Genma. The Kakashi/Shika bonding is going great--I love how Shika shivers when Kakashi says his name. The sharing of the Icha Icha books was a good touch too. I love the white fang on the chain--and the suicide of the dad--almost no one ever talks about that in Kakashi stories. This is really going well--with the good amount of time that has passed, it should also stop anyone from being freaked out about underage thing--you've made it clear this is a romance not a perv thing. I'm looking forward to more--great two chapters!!!

Yes! You're making a Neji/Genma pre-fic, limey! Yaaay ! I love you. -giggle-
Good fic so far! Update soon!

Hi--thanks for the thanks--you're very welcome. I felt inspired by that to note down a few little grammar things. But first--yea!!! I love it--I have to confess I sort of stole a page from your book and suddenly added a backstory to my Neji/Gaara romance, making Neji's first love Genma--please don't be mad! Anyway I made Genma a jerk unlike your Genma. I like the friendship between Shika and Neji here--I'm a little curious about the comment about Lee--is there some past event involving Lee, Neji, and Shika that will surface, or is it just Shika doesn't like Lee because he is the antithesis of laziness. I love the explanation for Shika's mom--great stuff! Well I hope we get a little bit of lemon in the next chapter--even if its just a little verticle dry humping and ass gripping--please!!! Neji--sneaking over to see Genma--well he's no coward. Great stuff! Oh, and here's the little grammar notes I promised. Thanks for the update!

1. line 2—mother’s concerns
2. Quotes inside quotes usually become single quotes: “Yeah `Oh’… That’s him… What should I do Shikamaru?
3. in same paragraph it’s easier to read if you say cloud-white eyes
4. “so wired answers”?? “such weird answers”?
5. “to much” should be “too much”