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for Snow-white dishonour.

by PurpleKitten

person Hestia
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I only saw a few typos (west for vest is the only one I remember at the moment). I really love these unique pairings--I like the chuunin rule--nice touch. Well I love all four characters, and they seem like they could be very happy pairs--I looking forward to seeing how this works out. Great start!