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June 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can easily say that Naruto is in fact too innocent for his own good.Maybe they can fall in love slowly or something because i can see Garra gutting him when he sleeps if he is pissed off,which we all know is pretty much all the time.Do keep up the good work and hope Gaara is Seme Naruto in this fic is to uke-ish for his own good.
Critique-A few mispelled words,and needs to be descriptive in some places.But over all a good 4 stars.
Keep up the good work an hope to see some updates soon.
Critique-A few mispelled words,and needs to be descriptive in some places.But over all a good 4 stars.
Keep up the good work an hope to see some updates soon.
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE ONEGAI!~!~!^_^
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December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you should put the other chapters up REALLY soon cuz I really want to read the rest of this...o yeah try and check out my crack story while your at it...it is a Gaa/Lee one but w/e it is called Fluffy Kink Onsen...plz tell me what you thik of mine so far...I LOVE yours!! it is awesome!
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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
If I scream enough will you update? (I promise not to try. xD) Anyway...I'm ready for the next chap! (obviously) The way you ended the chap has me all "What's going to happen!" And "Poor Narutard...I mean Naruto." (Really, I love him. lol) Keep it up!
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December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woow, lolz, kewl. This is a good fic... update soon~~
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December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the story! But Erm... I have this feeling that, Naruto is a little bit OOC? But I love him. ^_^ Can't wait for the next chapter!
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December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh. You go Gaara, grab that cutie prince! I must ask, is this Gaa/Naru or Naru/Gaa? =3
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December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* Gaanarugaa! yay! more! and great premise btw. =P
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December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! update soon please!!!!^-^
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December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes you must continue!! I can't wait for more!