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December 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's really good but another chapter would be nice
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December 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS AWESOMEEEE!!!!!! Please write more!
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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The 'Wow' Bit Was Out-Of-Place.She Should've Said Something More...Sexier.
But I Like The Way You Depicted Naruto's Feeling & Whirling Emotions.Nice Writing Skills Indeed.
Update Soon. ^_^
But I Like The Way You Depicted Naruto's Feeling & Whirling Emotions.Nice Writing Skills Indeed.
Update Soon. ^_^
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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just make one more please... its hard to judge - you dont tell very much...
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well, it's just one chapter...
What's the fun of putting Hinata in it is all she's gonna do is stand there, ne?
update, onegai!!!
What's the fun of putting Hinata in it is all she's gonna do is stand there, ne?
update, onegai!!!
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August 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please continue i like this story
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August 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why havn't you done chapter two yet? You got the positive respone you wanted, so where's the next chapter? Come on, we NEED the next installment. Please don't abandon it as a simple one-shot when it could be so much more. :(
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March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my fucking word...
THE SECOND ONE!!!
ASAP!!
wii-chan would love this if it weren't about sakura...
oh well!! we'll send it anyways.
i seriously thought this was supposed to be a Naruto/Hinata!
Why the hell is the first page about sakura?!
it's good anyways.
THE SECOND ONE!!!
ASAP!!
wii-chan would love this if it weren't about sakura...
oh well!! we'll send it anyways.
i seriously thought this was supposed to be a Naruto/Hinata!
Why the hell is the first page about sakura?!
it's good anyways.
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February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME story!!! ^_^ It should be a crime if you don't continue this...
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January 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A novel premise! I'd like to see more.