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for Pain

by Vague

person Nick
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome beginning please update soon.
person Nameramthgin
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Any chance at more chapters? If their is I might let you sit at the cool kids table. :)
person Blackash Kitsune
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Keep it up. I want to see some more here.
Chop Chop! (LOL, just kidding).

But seriously, get me 20 more cc's of 'Pain'... STAT!
person Jessica
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please write anothor chapter! Normally I only go for maledom but I love the Naruto/Hinata relationship. I'm kinda shocked that I like this, but I did. Another chapter, please! I'll be your best friend!
person ...
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
make more please
person Whiskas
schedule December 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
continue please!!!
=^.^=
person sarcastique
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i dont know why but i think i have read this before. it is not exactly the same as the one i have read but the majority of it is. im not sure where i read the other one though, it could be here or mediaminer.org. but i am very sure that i have read this before!!! anyway i thought it was good then i i think it is even better now. i think the other one was called aphrodisiac(spelling?).
person Josh
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Was it all a dream or what... That would of been fun if you kept on with it.. Kepp the writings coming.. I think Hinata and Naruto is one of the best pairings but not much of them out there so keep on going with this story please.....
person .........
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
damn that was fucking great
person Havenoname
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like what I'm reading. You should keep going.