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for Torture Comes in Many Forms

by Hestia

schedule March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad this was updated because I think it's so great! The unusual pairing - you write it really well ; and well - smut is HOT ;)

Nice

Hina xXxx
person Erbjen
schedule February 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story, I really like Ibiki x Sai. I hope it continues soon, can't wait to read more ^^
person Trollmia
schedule February 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You do know that I will hold you responsible for getting me even more hooked on Ibiki (and Sai too for that matter)... This story is just hasardous to my health because I'm sure that my blood is supposed to stay inside my body - not blow right out of my nose!
person evil_twin_pride
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi,

can wait for more, this is getting interesting. Keep up with the good job. SxI

:)
person Allys
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another Nice chappie. I especially liked the whole scene with Tsunade, Kotetsu and Izumo that was a whole new concept for me, one day I'll be able to put into words what it is I like so much about your writing, unfortunately that day is not today, thanks for the update though.
person Allys
schedule February 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, we went from psychological angst, to Sai being utterly HOT and possessive - “You . . . Are . . . Fucking . . . Sexy . . . And . . . I . . . Am . . . Going . . . To . . . Keep . . . You—“ - to WTF??? LOL!!! I have to say reading this story is like a roller coaster ride, I Love it.
person ricemice
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow thats quite unexpected pair, but after a first shock I grow to like it,
they are quite similar to each other, both complicated outsiders, well Im looking forvard what happens next:)
please continue aaah and "a virgin kiss" also!
person eau_vive
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

can't wait for more, keep up with the good job.
:)
person Allys
schedule January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I think I've finally pinpointed it, what it is that I love about your lemons. It's that sense of worship, of possession and desperation, and all the wonder and exploration that comes from it. All the best parts of B and D without the actual binding, it's absolutely fabulous. And your last sentence killed me, don't make Ibiki be sad, it's breaking my heart... that large, imposing, unassailable, Fragile man should never be sad. Hugs all around.
person Trollmia
schedule January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot, hot, hot...
I've never cared much for Sai before... but together with Ibiki... It is just so damn hot!