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by MsKeller

person Noite Bela
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
8fneimoztjpgfdeg OMGTHISISSOEFFINGADORABLE *incoherent noises* and...the bits with the kissing and awkwardness andandand OMG Jiraiya as Yondy's dad andandand *glee*

I..wow..just this was hysterical and fun an d adorable...and I am...and the character descriptions! I mean..for an AU they were spot on and just...fufufu and FUGAKU OMG and MIKOTO AND ITACHI...

I...have so much blissful love for you right now...

<3
Noite
schedule April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chap1 - The interactions between Sasuke's and Naruto's parents was so funny. Also the first meeting between the two boys was great. Hehe. Sasuke trying to be all grown up, but he's such a kid! Hahaha. And yeah... A pruse wouldn't be very manly I guess (I use a backpack as well hm..).

Chap2 - Sasuke and Naruto is so damn cute together. Sasuke is such a good friend and Mikoto is such a great mom. *smiles*

Chap3 - Ah the whole kissing-conversation just made me laugh so much! "Will you just shut up and get this over with." Mwahahaha!
And wow. The making out was... Damn Mikoto for interrupting that! Haha.

Chap4 - Hahaha the best part was Sasuke throwing Naruto over his shoulder. *snicker* And the whole lemon-thing was so hot. But gah! He walked in on them! *hides*

Chap5 - Aw Naruto is such a cutie. Sasuke should be happy to be glomped by him. The ending was really funny. Haha.

Nice little "story". I liked. Very entertaining. *smile*
person Deidara
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!
person Dragon7
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.
person Narukyou
schedule September 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aha. i just remembered the unedited one was here.
sweeeeeeeeeet x3
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahaha kawaii!!!!!! ooh you just gotta update again soon!!
person shinigami714
schedule June 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cutest story ever!
^________^
person tsuneki
schedule June 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, this is so cute and so hot at the same time! *whipes nosebleed away* ^__^
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this series! They're so cute and the sex is sexy! Are you going to do one for when they officially got together? Thank You:)
person Yuri-san
schedule February 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5 was sooo cute!! X3 My face is red from laughter! (Of course, is was red for an entirely different reason after reading chapter 4. ;D Smuttacular! XD)