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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a fun read. I'm glad they will not be in any specific order. You tend to get ideas later on and want to got back and yadayada. That last one was a GOOD chap. Update soon!
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January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ryahah!xD
So funny! Update soon! ne?^o^
So funny! Update soon! ne?^o^
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was good!
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome idea and well written. I'm thinking about writing a chapter. I'll contact you by email a little later. Can't wait for the next chapter. ^.^
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg, wasn't like, just yesterday that we talked about this? ah, that was wonderful. very hawt, and funny as hell. is kyuubi going to do some crazed mother shit next update? i can so see her kidnapping naruto. man, what a shame. which gets me thinking... naruto was 17 in this one, so why in the world would yondy think his mother could do anything to him? unless he's just a pansy... but then again, i know that father mentality, always looking out for your precious baby... *rolls eyes at her own father*
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I remember this as being really well written. Its been quite a while though and I forgot your writing style. In this new chapter, i found many many mistakes and it could have been written better. I'm not sure if it's your beta or if its you but perhaps its time for a better editor. I really like this story. I think its adorable and I'm not trying to insult your beta or anything. Promise. Hope to see more soon.
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter. i have been in that position before (have you) and let me tell you if they walk away you might as well keep going because who knows when you will get the chance again. are you going to have a flashback of what yondy says to the boys in another age or are you going to continue it later on. i can't wait to see.
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice sex scene, I am very impressed. That was fun and funny.
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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hhhhhhhmmmmmmmmm yummy the third chappy is really good ^^ teehee can't wait to see what wil happen in two year or so XD (if the try kissing each other at 14 what will it be when the hormones push them farther?? XD)
hehe anyway I love the Idea! ^^ till how much will you go? 20? 80? XD
wanna read mooooore ^^
hehe anyway I love the Idea! ^^ till how much will you go? 20? 80? XD
wanna read mooooore ^^
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! Please update soon! This story is sooo cute!