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for Playmate

by MsKeller

person zomgsignupnow
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You sure gave ME a nosebleed O___O
I love how each chapter shows the boys in different ages and how their love starts from innocent friendship to something more, and blah blahb labhl.....

waiting for the next one~
person wendyghost
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh, this is so good!
person minjin
schedule December 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I will be your stalker now!!! Oh god thats such an awesome fic!!! Their frienndship is so intense but really Naruto and Sasuke like. I love it ^^
person lo
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2, too cute and sweet I love it. Keep up the good work.
person airhead622
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIIIIIIIIIIIIT!!!

IT'S JUST LIKE WOW
perfection
like seriously
it's original and cute with just the right
amount of smutt

continue?????
*gets on knees and pleads*
person Stacy
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes! I love it!! I can't wait to see what comes next!
person Anon
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kawaii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LOVE IT
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! This is so cute and sweet! Good idea. I wonder how old they'll be in the next chapter? Seventeen, right?
person Nomme de Plume
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
those had to be the cutest, saddest, and hawtest things i have ever read!! i'm so glad you posted them here! i mean, there really aren't words to describe how much i love these little ficlettes that chronicle their relationship. i guess i just love them to bits! oh, and as to 'yondy,' i kinda like the sound of 'yondai' myself, though it's your decision as to what the name is.

anyway, i hope you continue with these little things as well as your other stories soon!
person Talking_Butterfly
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! I love this kind of stories. Good spelling, good grammar - keep 'em chapters comin'! Merry Christmas!