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for Playmate

by MsKeller

person asds
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HAHAH! Chapter 3 was great , chapter 2 was really touching...and I really Love you're Mikoto!
person me
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THE YONDAIME'S NAME IS ARASHI!!! YONDY TOTALLY SUCKS! MAKES HIM SOUND LIKE HE'S FOUR!!! otherwise the story seems fun, please continue...
person Passing Reader
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very cute, and silightly hot ^^; cant wait to read more! :D
person littleolmee
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah you have started to write another story, its really good. Love how each chapter is a little later in life for them. Yes, ch 3 was nosebleed worthy indeed. Hope to see more from you with this story, keep up the good work.
person Danii The Muse
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the idea of this story. They are just too cute! I can't wait to see more.

Now, I must run to my own bathroom to get some tissues. ;)
person lo
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved that first chapter, it was sooooo cute. Nice work.
person Fangbaby2002
schedule December 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Too cute. You have got to continue this one. I love it.