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for You Were Never Mine

by Reyn

person zZz
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
zomg? *starts spanking you with a wooden spoon*

how daree youuuu make me shed tears! and that really isnt the end? i'm happy and sad at the same time. boo hooo hoo hoo-hurrah hurrah! *continuously spanks you*
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn girl! that was mean! Here i was all sad that it ended that way but fully ready to accept it and move on. Jeeze, this is why i don't celebrate April Fools. Anyway, looking forward to the real chapter.
person emp78
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brat! but love ya anyway!
person ai-chan
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMGOSH
so mean~~
kuso xD
person oraday
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I knew it! And I still left such a review just in case. I knew there was something fishy when you updated so quickly. :shrug: Best April Fool's joke I've had played on me today. I was hoping somebody would do it^.^

Oh, and I even if it wasn't your intention, thanks for letting us see the outcome of Naruto's death. I was debating whether I wanted him to live or not and now I'm certain I want him to live.
person Anon
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That is the second april fools that has been played on me =+.+=
person LALA
schedule April 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GAH, oh you so totally got me >_>
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was really sad... *sigh* and if Sasuke isn't carefull as much as it pains me to say something like that might actually happen *sigh*. It was really well told though ^_6 and I think it evoked the right emotions without going into too much detail, really nice.

Hina xXxx
person oraday
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Um... This is an April Fool's joke, right? I mean, you can't just... Wah! I thought there was a happy ending to this one... Okay, this pretty much goes against all my love for sunshine-happy, Sasuke-carrying-Naruto-off-into-a sunset-endings, but I did like this one. I guess even if I couldn't decide whether I wanted Naruto to die, I think I really did want him to just stop hurting. I won't say a big bwahaha to Sasuke just yet though... I still think of all people, Naruto is irreplaceable and I don't think getting over him is possible. I figure Sasuke's going to look at his child with some type of regret from now on. Then the kid'll go crazy because of it and end the Uchiha clan. :shrug:

I have to say though, I didn't find this ending particularly sad... It was just... Right, I guess. I didn't have any sympathy for Sasuke and I was happy for Naruto. So all in all, nice ending. I still want that sunshine-happy ending where even Sasuke is happy...
schedule April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SO SAD! T-T I cried at the end.