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for You Were Never Mine

by Reyn

person oraday
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Crap... I'm debating whether I want Naruto to die or not... I don't want him to suffer anymore and I don't think Sasuke can do much of anything to make up for what he did to Naruto... But I love Naruto and I want him to live!

Hm, I suspect Sasuke saved Naruto here... You seem to have left hints insinuating that. I'm not sure if I want that happening, however. Ah, the ambivalence.
person Samira
schedule March 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I don't care if you didn't like this chapter, I did.

Man, it sucks that Naruto didn't get an invitation, but couldn't that be a good thing? How hurtful would it have been if Sasuke had invited him to watch him marry someone else? Gotta count for something. ^_~

Perfect setup for the next chapter that I'll be eagerly awaiting. ^^
person keroppi
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was... beautiful. Short, straight to point and oh so amazing. How Naruto realizes how selfish he's being just by seeing Sasuke with his kiddo is just, woah, that must hurt.

Anyways, sankyuu for such an incredible story! <333
person eternal
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is GREAT STORY wish have read it sooner :(
btw just wondering will our poor naruto hang out and have relationship with neji?
Wish it is though that just like what our dear naruto was hoping that sasu would take naruto from neji... ^-~
but this one of the angst fic i've read...
just please tell me that it hasn't end right? please continue this story
thanks
person barara
schedule February 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg... that was so sad :( aww poor naruto. T_T i love angst. I'm emotionally masochistic :P So write more and make me sadder please!
person Saiou-chan
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grrrrrrrrrr Damn you Sasuke! Yaknow I've never really hated him till now. I've wanted to knock some sence into him, I've wanted to rattle his brains, and I've wanted to chase him around town and make him mine, but I've never hated him, till now. I have a suggestion though, I think Naruto should go to his brother of all people, that would reeeeaaaaaaaallly frost Sasuke's cookies. ^^
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a great piece of writing. I am so sad for Naruto! I hope he is able to be happy with someone else. Ultimately, that will be his best revenge against Sauske, which I am not certain is suffering enough for what he did (but I really don't know that, I haven't heard his side.) I simply cannot wait for your next update!!
person sadistickiss
schedule February 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*cringes* I hated the part about Sasuke under the tree. Absolute hated it. Not because it was badly written, or that it didn't belong in the story, just that it made me want to punch my fist into a stone wall. It's not FAIR! Why does Naruto have to hurt? Why? He's been through so much already... and... it's just not fair! Argh..

Great job, as usual. It's amazing how you can put so much power into such a small chapter XP. I DEMAND AN UPDATE! Okay... that's mean XP. PLEASE UPDATE!!!

Oh... and... ARE YOU UPDATING 'Won't Let You Go'?! PLEASE, I BEEEEEEEG YOU! UPDATE IT!! PLEAAAAAAAAAAAASE. I've been trying to hold myself back from sending a billion reviews nagging you to update it. I CAN'T TAKE IT! IT'S JUST SO FUNNY, AND I'M SO IN LOVE WITH IT. PLEAAAASE!!!
person Jason
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well that was good though now I'm really depressed....<.<
I feel so sad......
person oraday
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wah! This was heart-wrenchingly sweet. I dunno how to explain it. Once again, the emotions your simple writing evoked were so intense and almost overwhelming. I am definitely greatful these are done in such shot installments. I read through them slowly, just to savor every bit of emotion that's conveyed. Even if it's pain or resentment or a bittersweet realization, it's wonderful.

Still... I wish things could work out between them... Not in the friendship way either. I want them to be happy together. I want Sasuke to own up to his mistake and do something to fix things with Naruto, because Naruto deserves it.

Goodness, this fic reminds me of RosesAreBlue's fic... I forgot what it's called... Yeah, it's pretty much a totally different situation, but the frustration from the complexity of Sasuke and Naruto's relationship... I think that's the same^.^