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by ClaireBear

person sugar
schedule February 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have read this story in one whole day and I never knew it was possible to fall in love with a story!!! I love the character growth the togetherness Sasuke, Naruto, Hinata, and Neji written beautifully!! I have to say Sasuke and Neji I love their relationship everything the interaction all of it I hope they have baby :-3 *wink wink* Please whatever do I hope this story gets finish someday. Man this pairing I never thought much of but after this and your others from before "An Indecent Affair" and "Viva Forever" (which I hope also gets completed someday) you have got my vote!!! Can I just say Naruto is the coolest best friend ever and thank you for not making ridiculously dumb and giving him brains geez!!! And also I love the way you have written Sasuke and to see he still a teme but you can tell he loves and cares deeply for Neji, Naruto, and Hinata!!!! Please update I can’t wait to see what happens. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks!!!!!

person Inigeshi
schedule April 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
POKE!

not to be rude but i've been waiting for an update for three years (little hypocritical of me, i know) but can i please get at least a little status update? is inbred going to be finished? if not what were your plans for the story? I was really loving this fic i just want to know...

Inigeshi
schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lovely the tale flows really well and i can hardly wait to read more of it i hope you can update soon as i realy want to see how a pair of males get their girls free of their family and if they both pop one little question lol
person lindsay
schedule September 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is fucking perfect. it just draws u in. dont give up on it
person kaky
schedule September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the story still end it' s my favorutite couple but I think it'll be better if neji was a normal man because I think it's hotter but you create a good scene of violence so well done .AND KEEP WRITING
person Anon
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was good, you should really forget about that other story and update this one. I mean you already did like 58 chapters might as well finish it. PLEASE!!!
person Tammy500
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow love ya story, u gotta update lik nownownownownow, i hav read every single one of ur chapters and love them all, it would be soo neat if u like had a girl hit on sasuke and naruto and the girls lik walk in it would be so old school drama soooo cool
love ya
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi there Honey!
How are you? Long time no see.
I read all the chapters, but I was unable to leave you a review.

I really like this chapter, it was all cool.
See you soon!
person soft_touches
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah, that cleared everything up for me. I might just throw-up reading about Jiraiya / Tsunade. Is the group going back to America with Naruto? that would be funny.
person Twiggies
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why does everyone else get sick but meeee??
I'm actually one of those who want's sick, so whyyyy?

Anyway!
Great chapter once again!
I only think it's good you're writing long chapters!
Hehe, and this one was funny!
Tsunade and Jiraiya are the best. Just the right parent's for Naruto.

And everyone knows where Sasuke and Neji's studies always ends up! xDD
Even Naruto isn't that dumb! xD

I'm glad you updated again!
And I hope you will be updating soon again and keep writing!