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by ClaireBear

person Angst
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't see why you don't like this chapter. I loved it. I can't help but pity poor Hanabi though she must be one messed up kid. I really enjoy reading this story. In fact, you're theo nly reason I check this site, daily mind you. Your fics as addictign as a drug.
I hope everythign is going well with you
~Angst~
person Soft_touches
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't have much to say but this chapter did clear up all of the plot so far ;) ... Um I forgot what I was going say! Reading Emily Bronte will leave you like that.
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your story. I found it interesting and I love the parings, specially SasuNeji.
person hyabusajiraiyarulz
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice update! no plotholes yet! gj
person JaneDoe01
schedule January 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for your story!! Update soon please!!
person Angst
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ack, please don't remind me. I try not think aobut what he does to them. He's a ninja michael Jackson.

At least, the guys have finally figured out the big mess. Well sort of. I can imagine the next chapter is sure to be interesting. Thank you for updating!
Love you platonically,
Angst
person Soft_touches
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo much DRAMA. First you want to kill Neji (death by orgasms) I am glade he's alive that would really suck if you kill your boy/girlfriend during sex on accident. Then the beloved Henata. Well she would have made it out anyway but Naruto I real sorry for he had no idea. It would be really funny if Orochimaru was on a show call To Catch A Sex Predator :-x
person Dragonsbreath
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O_o... o_O.... O_O
OK, so, what are you suppressing? You don't want us to see the best part, right? Or maybe it's a test for the ones waiting for the Naruto Hinata part, to see if they are reading the other parts too? *still recovering from the evil autor's note*
In other words, your chapter counting seems a bit of, also the aff title for chapter 26 says 21.
And as long as you get to the NarutoHinata part, take your time. ^^
person Angst
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah, yes you are evil! Why did you have to stop it there ;.;. No, Hinata. Gah, Orichimaru really comes off as a pedophile here. Wont you give uncle a kiss? ekk, that creeped me out on several levels. Please, continue soon!
person Soft_touches
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your AWESOME!!! A.W.E.S.O.M.E. Kakashi reminds me of a teacher I have. Sorry if I caused you trouble in anyway. I really enjoy reading so keep going. One more thing, I love the sex crazed Neji but when is Naruto going to knock the boots again (for giggles n grins) I hope there will be a happy ending with Sasuke and Hinata. PEACE N LUV.