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by ClaireBear

person hyabusajiraiyarulz
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nicely done ! update more plz!
person Dim Song
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awww... cute story where'd get it? Also i love when the ch ends wit a line that is so funny
~Dim Song
person Soft_touches
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ur crazy. I hate your story so much i cant help myself to reading it. Its different way and i like that. so keep up the good work. *Can you throw Kakashi in the mix?*
person hyabusajiraiyarulz
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im reading this fiction through my cellphone so i cannot type much but gj n continue i'll try 2 spot plotholes
person Angst
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, me likes! That was, that was hot. Still I can't wait until Sasuke meets Hinata, or will he split Naruto up from her before knowing what hapened. How is Hinata going to react to a very drunk Naruto?Thankies for the update. I hope your family thing gets resolved and that everything is alright.
person hyabusajiraiyarulz
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwwwww so short yet so awesome... plz continue
person Dragonsbreath
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I think I know why there are only few reviews for this story.
You update so fast, nobody dares to write a review because before the review is up, there's already the next chapter. ^^
Well what can I say, interesting job Hinata has there, ehm, yeah, now I'm really curious how you'll make Sasuke/Neji react once they know who Naruto's girlfriend is. Hmm, Naruto is quite cautious, I wonder how Sasuke would react if Naruto just told him "btw., she's that girl from Kiba's".
Hmmm, oh well, keep up the good work. :)
person hyabusajiraiyarulz
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this.
person hyabusajiraiyarulz
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update plz!
person hyabusajiraiyarulz
schedule December 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update plz! 1 million star rating