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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful chapter. I can't help but think Hinata will get a big hug from Tsunade the moment she either comes back to the US with Naruto or Tsunade comes to visit.
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow,i'm so happy! its almost been a year since you started... Anyway what is the meaning of the last paragraph? What does it mean? What does it mean? I hope Hinata doesn't have a crush on Sasuke or those two don't have some past history together. Til next chapter, I'll be thinking about it.
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November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yaay! Wonderful update!
Ah, Sasuke and Neji are always so hot.
-Cough- And yes: Naruto's always hungry, just like Neji's always HORNY!
It's proofed! xDD
Aww, Hinata and Neji's bathroom scene was so cute!
I can picture it in my mind so clearly.
And what about Sasuke and Naruto's playing? xDD
Well, that Monopoly ended on the floor.. just like the boys.. Well, boys are boys. They both just happens to be very eager ones! xDD
You know, I am SO VERY RELIEFED to hear that Sasuke won't let those Hyuuga bastards do anything to Neji-chan~!
And I am SO VERY HAPPY that you updated!
'Cause you know how much I love this story!
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
LOVE YA!
Tyra~
Ah, Sasuke and Neji are always so hot.
-Cough- And yes: Naruto's always hungry, just like Neji's always HORNY!
It's proofed! xDD
Aww, Hinata and Neji's bathroom scene was so cute!
I can picture it in my mind so clearly.
And what about Sasuke and Naruto's playing? xDD
Well, that Monopoly ended on the floor.. just like the boys.. Well, boys are boys. They both just happens to be very eager ones! xDD
You know, I am SO VERY RELIEFED to hear that Sasuke won't let those Hyuuga bastards do anything to Neji-chan~!
And I am SO VERY HAPPY that you updated!
'Cause you know how much I love this story!
I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
LOVE YA!
Tyra~
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
LOVE this fic! I think I'm becoming a real fan of Sasu/Neji (since there's so little Kiba/Neji or Itachi/Neji...the latter being enemy slash which is anudder fave of mine) because of your fics. Please do keep working on your unfinished stuff, 'k? XD Okee.
I am a oui confused and this is why. You wrote:
In my first draft, Neji and Sasuke never break up but after thinking about it I wondered just how on earth they expected to stay together with Hiashi still around so they had to end it, sorry.
Now, to me it just seems totally illogical to let Neji anywhere near his family now that they've gone homicidal on him. On one hand I can see that Neji would think he'd have to go since he doesn't know that they've made an attempt on his life, but Sasuke knows. Shouldn't he say something to him?
Not trying to burn you by any means, sweetie, this story is an epic and I've LUBBED it so far, truly, madly, deeply. *laughs* Just that one little nng. *blows you a kiss* BBFN
LOVE this fic! I think I'm becoming a real fan of Sasu/Neji (since there's so little Kiba/Neji or Itachi/Neji...the latter being enemy slash which is anudder fave of mine) because of your fics. Please do keep working on your unfinished stuff, 'k? XD Okee.
I am a oui confused and this is why. You wrote:
In my first draft, Neji and Sasuke never break up but after thinking about it I wondered just how on earth they expected to stay together with Hiashi still around so they had to end it, sorry.
Now, to me it just seems totally illogical to let Neji anywhere near his family now that they've gone homicidal on him. On one hand I can see that Neji would think he'd have to go since he doesn't know that they've made an attempt on his life, but Sasuke knows. Shouldn't he say something to him?
Not trying to burn you by any means, sweetie, this story is an epic and I've LUBBED it so far, truly, madly, deeply. *laughs* Just that one little nng. *blows you a kiss* BBFN
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, one more thing...
The sexual "abuse and blurred lines of consent" (which I find neither abusive nor blurred) between Sasuke and Neji are soooooooo hot and obviously a big reason why the two of them are so drawn to one another. The way I see it, Neji's got a certain amount of testosterone along with his girly hormones thus creating his androgyny (because if he didn't, his family wouldn't have insisted he be raised as a boy, right, right?). And most guys like sex a bit rougher than many girls. Perhaps others would have been more comfy with SasuNeji's NC-17 scenes had there been a teensey bdsm warning on it although I'm not criticizing at all. *shrugs* I may have read this quicker if there'd been a bdsm warning, but hey--I found it. XD I ATE up Sasuke/Neji's chemistry with a great big ice cream spoon and didn't need dessert, thank you very much. ^.~
The sexual "abuse and blurred lines of consent" (which I find neither abusive nor blurred) between Sasuke and Neji are soooooooo hot and obviously a big reason why the two of them are so drawn to one another. The way I see it, Neji's got a certain amount of testosterone along with his girly hormones thus creating his androgyny (because if he didn't, his family wouldn't have insisted he be raised as a boy, right, right?). And most guys like sex a bit rougher than many girls. Perhaps others would have been more comfy with SasuNeji's NC-17 scenes had there been a teensey bdsm warning on it although I'm not criticizing at all. *shrugs* I may have read this quicker if there'd been a bdsm warning, but hey--I found it. XD I ATE up Sasuke/Neji's chemistry with a great big ice cream spoon and didn't need dessert, thank you very much. ^.~
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think I'm in love with this 'family', yeah, that's it!.
It's been a while, but I'm glad to see moew of your story.
You know...I think I know what's going on with Neji's card...but I'm not saying it! I want to read and be sure of it...
OMG! I just love those 4!
Thanks for the chapter.
It's been a while, but I'm glad to see moew of your story.
You know...I think I know what's going on with Neji's card...but I'm not saying it! I want to read and be sure of it...
OMG! I just love those 4!
Thanks for the chapter.
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August 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awh. Really great update.
Sasuke and Naruto's game was quite amusing. xDD
Naruto gave up when he saw vegetables? Poor him.
And what about all the shopping they did, and all that to Neji? xD
And the shoes, damn that was brilliant.
The ending was so cute.
They all must be very pleased once they wake up again.
I really love this story, and all the chapter are so great, I don't even remember how many times I have read this story through. xD
But keep writing, and update whenever you feel like it. :D
Sasuke and Naruto's game was quite amusing. xDD
Naruto gave up when he saw vegetables? Poor him.
And what about all the shopping they did, and all that to Neji? xD
And the shoes, damn that was brilliant.
The ending was so cute.
They all must be very pleased once they wake up again.
I really love this story, and all the chapter are so great, I don't even remember how many times I have read this story through. xD
But keep writing, and update whenever you feel like it. :D
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July 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww.
You're right! This chapter was cute!
The (more) feminine Neji is quite adorable. And I liked it when you addressed Neji as girl.
I can only imagine how cute and sexy Neji's belly piercing is! Sasuke is a lucky guy!
''We are family
I got all my sisters with me
We are family
Get up ev'rybody and sing'' Yaaay! xDD
I really liked this chapter!
I hope you write more! KEEP WRITING AND UPDATE SOON! LOVE YA !
You're right! This chapter was cute!
The (more) feminine Neji is quite adorable. And I liked it when you addressed Neji as girl.
I can only imagine how cute and sexy Neji's belly piercing is! Sasuke is a lucky guy!
''We are family
I got all my sisters with me
We are family
Get up ev'rybody and sing'' Yaaay! xDD
I really liked this chapter!
I hope you write more! KEEP WRITING AND UPDATE SOON! LOVE YA !
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July 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I just spent nearly two days reading this story. It is so compelling and you create so many threads of concern. I love it!!!
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July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was adorable!
I love every part of it because it was just so cute, Neji and Sasuke are al lovable and I like this couple so much!!
and That's why every time I remember they are going to be appart ones again makes me cry!! *cries* I don't want them to be apart again *whimper* but I trust you! *clean the tears* and I know you have a very nice rest of the story ahead and I soooo want to read it.
Also, I loved Tobi in the last chapter, he is a good boy *jeje* and came just in time...and now I want to know what Deidara and his team are going to do... hum...
Yayness, thanks for the chapter.
I love every part of it because it was just so cute, Neji and Sasuke are al lovable and I like this couple so much!!
and That's why every time I remember they are going to be appart ones again makes me cry!! *cries* I don't want them to be apart again *whimper* but I trust you! *clean the tears* and I know you have a very nice rest of the story ahead and I soooo want to read it.
Also, I loved Tobi in the last chapter, he is a good boy *jeje* and came just in time...and now I want to know what Deidara and his team are going to do... hum...
Yayness, thanks for the chapter.