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by ClaireBear

person soft_touches
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HeyHey. i can't wait to find out what's up with neji. probably something small that she blew out of proportion. well take your time updating.
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soft_touches
person soft_touches
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HeyHey. i can't wait to find out what's up with neji. probably something small that she blew out of proportion. well take your time updating.
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person Tyra
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooohh my God!
The Hyuuga-stalkers! They're going to take Neji away, and propably Hinata too! ..Or are they? Scary..
Hmm.. I'm not entirely sure why Neji's so pissed. Maybe it's because I'm not fully awake yet? xD
I hope they are all going to calm down and stuff.
This chapter was so good.
I hope you update soon again! Keep writing!
Love ya!
schedule June 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I Love this story! How do you keep the plot going? I have trouble...maybe it has something to do with the attention span of Naruto...I swear if I had Blond hair and blue eyes I could be his twin...Anyways keep up the good work! Ja Ne!
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Giggle*

Neji is having another hard need of Sasuke again, how cute.
...I love those two I wish they don't have to be apart T_T
Anyway, nice chapter!
person Twiggies
schedule June 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How cute chapter!
Heh, Sasuke was scolding Naruto for having a quickie with Hinata when he was the one who had a few more quickies with Neji. xDD
Neji's such an horny.. girl! Well, we all know that Sasuke's irresistable.
-sigh- ..Three weeks.. Poor guys. Well, at least Naruto and Hinata stays together right?

Keep writing and update soooon!! I love your stoorryyY!! xDD
person Twiggies
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you're doing this to me!! You made me cry.. Again!
I can't believe that Neji and Sasuke are going to break up! It's so sad. I really.. can't.. believe it..
Damn, I wish Hiashi would die..
Well, anyway.. I hope you update soon again..
I still love this fic, don't get me wrong. xD
I'm just emotional and sensitive and I love happy endings. xD

Keep writing and update soon.
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
But..but...but!
No...you are breaking my heart with that! Sasuke and Neji have to be together and, no, no. but how? Awww... this is confusing and sad, not again, they are going to be apart again? Damn Hiashi... he is ruining everything! *sob, sob* aww...

I know you are right and I know you have a point saying that how on earl they are going to stay together but, I don’t want them to be apart, same with Naruto and Hinata… God, the Hyuuga are so screw up, all they do is to ruin the life of their children! Damn…

*calms down* Anyway, I understand and… well, I wonder what you have in mind and… well I like this story a lot and now things are angsty again but, then again, if you like it this way and you have a plan for the story then go ahead! I like I said, the important thing here is if you like or not how your story is going.

…But they are meant to be!! *is in denial, as you can see* Ha, don’t mind me, I’ll keep reading. Because I still love this story, really.

*whimper*
schedule May 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just like a friend of mine will said,
"OMIGOSH!!! They are uber cute!!" *cough, cough*

Well, the ARE! Uber cute, yes, that's it. This chapter was nice, because they finally had each other and love each other and the silent promise of never leave the other is really something, I like it.

So, you are going to makes changes? It's okay for me I guess (Well, I don't know what the changes are anyway, lol) if the story makes more sense and you like it that way better then go ahead! is you story and what matters the most is if you like it.

(PS: ADC has been updated, finally!)
schedule May 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Hesitantly Raises Hand for Attention* will there be more soon? You have me hooked and I would love to see what happens next.