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by ClaireBear

schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you. XD

This chapter was nice, really. It was like "How to adjust to your new place" chapter or something. I love the brotherly relationship between Naruto and Sasuke and of course the way Naruto loves Hinata and Sasuke loves Neji, they are so cute!!

Hiashi is a bastard, must suffer in Itachi's hands *cough* how dares he?! argrrr,. well, more for the plot, jajajaja. I liked how Kakashi wants to help Sasuke, he is nice, like when Kurenai helped Hinata, nice teachers.

Awww, Neji-Hinata brotherly moment, how cute! And the smile! I love how you ended this chapter, you are right, it is sweet.

Congratulations for reaching you 50th chapter! This story is great.

PS: did I read right the past chapter’s author’s note? NC-17 coming? YAY! Misa wanna XP
person Tyra
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwh! So sweet!
Absolutely adorable chapter!
Neji's making some process on healing. He talks to Hinata and smiles a little at Sasuke. CUTE.
Uhh. And Sakura (+other Sasuke's fangirls).. bastards!
And and and.. Hiashi! That crumpy old man!
Heh.. yeah.

So.. I guess the first lemons are going to be NaruHina?
Now that I mentioned Naruto and Hinata.. They're actually kind of cute too. I never really cared about the whole pairing, but their just so lovely in this fic. :D

UPDATE SOON AGAIN! I HOPE YOU WRITE THOSE LEMONS SOON TOO ! AND AT LEAST SAUNEJI CUDDLING ! xDD

YEAH !
schedule April 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Epp, I love this. The updates are so quick. Aww, Tobi's so cute I want to see more of him. You know it would be funny if Naruto chooses in an inappropriate place for his antics only to be caught by one of the akatasuki memebers. Or maybe Tobi could be window washing. He's not stupid enoguh to try watching neji and Sasuke. Kekeke, I really love this story. I'm so glad you're updating.
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was nice, one of those "introduction" chapters I think.
Neji didn't appear too much in this one, guess he is still tired or something, Sasuke hug him!!!
I liked the Akatsuki there, Deidara is just cool and the others too and the relationship between Akatsuki and Itachi hint is interesting aswell, so, if they can protect Sasuke they can protect Neji too (Sasuke* huggin Neji*: NO touch! grrrr)

So, thanks for the chappie!
PS: remember I love you fanfics XDDD. SasuNeji hummm yummi.
person Tyra
schedule April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aah. You updated! (And again I'm stating the obvious..)

I like the Akatsuki. Tobi's funny and Deidara is cool! :D
Neji's so quiet. He must still be very tired. But he's safe in there, right? They all are.

HMMMM ? The lemons are coming in the near future? Good!

You must update your fics! Exspecially all the SasuNeji ones!

LOVE YA ! UPDATE SOON ! AND KEEP WRITIIIING !!! :DD :D :D :D :D

Yes, I'm feeling hyper today, thanks to your update. :D
schedule March 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You´re back! OMG you are back! I'm so glad you're back!! Did I mention that I'm glag you're back? through so.

Anyway, this chapter was nice, like the begginin of a whole new step into the story. Poor Neji, he was blaming himself all along, but now that Hinata is going to be with him more and help him just like Sasuke and Naruto had been doing (and secretly Itachi, I guess)

So they're going to the Uchiha Mansion? wow, guess that's a big step back to Sasuke, but safe anyway. So, you get Deidara into the story, I think that's going to be another interesting thing, I like him, he's just amusiong.

YAY! glad you're back!
person Tyra
schedule March 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*SMOOOOOCHHH* Aaah! I love you so much!
What a wonderful chapter! So sweet.
I love the way you write about Neji and Sasuke and their relationship. So beatiful.
Neji and Sasuke are truly made for each other.
I hope Neji gets better soon. And poor Neji, anyone (other than his friends) doesn't care about him.
-sends Neji flowers, chocolate and teddy bears- There you go!
YAY ! ...

Update soooon! (Yes, your other wonderful fics too)

person Tenithus
schedule March 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Comrade, do you remember me? I used to be called HyabusaJiraiyaRulez, please continue this story, I will be behind you 100%, Comrade. For the glory of the site and Naru/Hina continue this story.
person Tyra
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Maah!
Really interesting chapter!
Haku was so cute. :D
Aaw. And Neji's awake. xD YAY!
I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
Update soon!
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you're back. I hope you're enjoyign writing again. Hopefully, the monstrous writers block has been defeated.