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by ClaireBear

schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
No, no, Sweetie, your five minutes had rune out, wake up! *takes off the covers*

Hello Again!

This chapter gave a lot of information, the character of Haku was interesting to see in your story and of course Zabuza (Yeah, he just loves Haku a lot, cute) but I liked the most of this chapter was that Neji had woke up at least and that gaves relieave to Sasuke in more than one way, good, he needed it.

Thanks for another chapter, take care, I hope you reach that part you want to reach of the story soon!
person Anon
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ja! It's nice to read another chapter and I'm glad you got your writing "mojo" back. I just got one question, well its more like a clarifaction... Danzo is a detective, right?
person Tyra
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh. Nice chapter. I still feel bad for Neji adn Sasuke. But everything is going to be fine, ne?
And I hope that Neji would be awake in the next chapter. xD
Hmm. Interesting, indeed. Keep writing!
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update!

Aww. This chapter was sad but the feeling was right for it, after all they had juts go out of a tragdy and Sasuke just got the know that is love is sad and in danger, so, I think the feeling for the chapter was actually right.

I Hope Neji gets better...its a great lost but he have to get better of will not recover. I'm so sure that Sasuke wont stop watching over him all the time, you write this paring in a way I love so much, it's my favorite after all.

So, I hope you find your right way to write again and most importan, enjoy doing it.

Take care!
person Dim Song
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice man glad to see ur back i was worried. But it dont matter cuase ur back. i kno how much of a pain 'writers block' is, i'm trying to write a paper, but I saw ur update and I was like "ahhh...fuck it more important"
~Dim Song
schedule February 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*pokes* Are you there? you are killing me, please continue, the good fics are had to find *puppy dog eyes*

Take care! 8D
schedule February 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon.
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww, Twisted brotherly moment *cough*

Well, looks like Itachi never stopped watching his bother and its doing someting to keep him safe. Neji, aw, poor Neji, They Hyuuga are evil to both of their children, first Hinata is casted away (but she's strong and she made it and please tell em se'll be fine! aggrrr) and Now they are hurting Neji badly ARGRRR!!! they must DIE!!! -rant, rant-

Yeah, it must be hard to Sasuke to admit that he needs Itachi but I think wat hurts him the most is to not understand his brother's way to be, because Itachi had not said all and I think that deeply, Sasuke wants to know they "whys" and all the rest, after all, Itachi is still there, even if Sasuke couldn't see him at all and now he has found that he is watching over him and Neji, I think is hard to him but arden is to not understand everything behind that.

This chapter gave a lot of feeling between those two. And now, Sasuke must hug his Neji and bring him some kind of peace, because surely he just won't leave him alone for a second, not after what happen.

Nice chapter, it came very good, take care!!!
person Dim Song
schedule February 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
GOOD DAMN! that was so good. I love that twist wit the bro's but will they go for hinata? but most important is i love the use of haku i liked him
~Dim Song
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dear God you update! thanks, tanks! waiting was killing me, really, but you update, yay!
Anyway, this chapter was fantastic, so much information and more mystery! What's going on? What is Itachi doing? Will Neji be fine wit time? my poor Neji and Sasuke are suffering so much and I am very sure that the Hyuugas are higtly to blame, wichs mades me enter in rant mode!! ARGR!!! -Yersi wants revenge!!- but also could be someone else... I don't care!! -still revenge- HAAAA ITACHI!!! WHAT'S GOING ON!!!

Please keep going, I'm so *in love* with your stories (yes, I said Stories I like "An Indecent Affair" also, yes musahahaha *cough*) Take care!!