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by ClaireBear

schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'm so glad you updated. I can never complain abotu any of your chapters your efforts and research really pull through. I think you made a wise choice about the media situation. it sounds really believable. I like how even when your tory takes dramatice turns it still retains an element of realism.
I actually look forward to seeign Itachi. The next few chapters are bound to be intense. Thank you for updating, I've been on pins and needles waiting to see what would happen.
person Soft_touches
schedule January 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Speak of the devil I'm back!!! A car accident, a broken arm, and weeks after retreving a stolen lap top I'm here. This story is amazing and these last chapters made me cry (may I add I'm a total sap/dramaQueen) and a little depressed but its all good. So I can't figure out who's good or bad I'm sure you'll strighten that out. Till then, later kid.
*P.S. your other stories are hot, really H.O.T. I'll review later cuz its alot of typing for one hand.*
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my god! oh my god!
You so got me freaking out here! GAWD!
And Neiji's already a basketcase, but now?! Whoa!
mmmmwhahahahaaha you devil you, this is getting juicier, and juicier!
Why are thugs trying to kill Hinata? hmmm I bet it's that demon
orochimaru (whatever his name is!) lol heheh this is good!!!
KUDOS!
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
NUUU!!! NEJI!!! My poor, poor Neji and Sasuke!! AWWWW!! *sob* Their baby!! AAAA!!! I want those bastard who hurt them DEAD!... or at least very punished... AW! CLIFFHANGER!! you want to kill me... (yet I'm happy that you story is interesting, very interesting and keeps me entertained)

Now I have some of my unspoken questions answered, some days ago I was wondering "If Sasuke and Neji intimate a lot and in one chapter Sasuke said that Neji was very fertile, wouldn't he have the possibility of pregnancy?... hum...HO WELL! an update!! I'll ask latter..." but I forgot XD. Well, now Neji knows why was he not having his period... but...but...THE BABY! aWWWWwwW... Now both are very sad... -urge to kill rising- evil..people..must..die...

OMG?! What's why that text message?! He can't leave Neji alone! but, but, the warning! what's going on?! You want to kill me, seriously. SO INTERESTING!!!

Ja ne!
person Twiggies
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh God !
First there were the accitend and then Neji lost his baby? Owww, poor Neji and Sasuke. How sad..
You have to update soon! I can't wait the next chapter. This story is getting more and more exciting.
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wah, when I read the title my heart started beatng wildly. I was tihnking you were going to kill Neji, and than that sudden twist. Ah wow, that was just as bad. I wonder what's happening. Who is that message from? What will they do?Oh wow, that was, oh my.The chapter was just so sad and powerful i have an ache in my heart. Please continue soon.
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that crash starlted me just as much as it did the characters. That's a great thing. Ack, they're looking for Hinata now. I wonder if anyone will save Sasuke and Neji. Gah, the action is heating up, you've got me on the edge of my seat.
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I knew it! I Always knew that that God Damn Bastard of Hiashi was going to make a move! He is traying to urt both Hinata and Neji!! I want him in hell in the hand of Uchiha Itachi (since he hurt Sasuke too) or somthing! Don't hurt Hinata! she has suffer enough! Damn that Hiashi!! ARG!!! -enters in rant mode against Hiashi- I ask you to update because I like your story a lot!

Thanks.
person Twiggies
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG !
Omgomgomg ! Those guys aren't going to kill them, right?!
I totally wasn't expecting that..!
Geez, update soon! Really soon! Gotta know what's going to happen.
person Twiggies
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh no.. What's going to happen to Hinata now? Heh, Well I'm sure that Neji will be pissed. Or something. Oh my gosh. You have to update soon. :S
Keep writing.