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Sorry, discontent is the name I use as an author. I use a different name while reviewing. Don't ask me why. I just realized what you said about the last chapter. 17 pages o.0 I've written four chapters of my own fic and I don't think I've come near seventeen pages yet. You realy are a remarkable writer. As much as I praise the smut it's the ocmedy i love best. The whole blue movie things had me rolling. It took me a while to undestand the reference, I'm as clueless as Hina. I loved picturing that ending scene you always write comedy so well. It's also very realistic as in real life comedy , misunderstanding over-reactions etc. And you keep the characters ic which is pretty f'n amazing. You deserve more praise than my sleep deprived mind can offer. Thank you for this great story!
~Angst~

wow, another great chapter. I loved it. I hope to read more soon.
The person, otherwise known as angst/

AwWwWWwwww, that was Sexy and Cute! yup, I like it, somehow perfect for Hinata. And I have to say that Naruto's innner pervert was so damn funny and the counter with Jiraiya...RFLMAO!!1111!!!11one!!eleven!!

Wuahaha, Naruto is evil. >:-D
Well a really nice chapter and a nice start for the two.
Nice work, keep going. :)

OMG. You write Neji in this capter as one of the most cute things ever, that was just hot, amusing, cool and well, I just like it, jajaja, nice one!

WOOOW ! This is fic is totally HOT !
I love this Sasuke and Neji's thing. They're so cute.
NaruHina isn't one of my favourites, but it do.
Update soon, will ya? Thanks! KEEP WRITING.

Oh my, I think I need a cold shower after that. Wow, Neji and Sasuke, that was wow. Thank you for the read.

Wow, that was a beautiful scene you created. I really enjoyed reading about the party. It was very well researched and very informative. The descriptions were also doubly good. Hmm, I was thinking. Kurenai comes off as very motherly toward Naruto I wonder if she woudl be able to help them hide Hinata.
Also, I can't help btu tihnk Orichimaru has put two and two together.
The brothel burns down the same night that his house is attacked. Plus Hinata hasn't returned to Hatsumo ( I know I'm mispelling). What if he has alerted the Hyuuga's to her existence and occupation. A further shame to the family. What happens if they went to investigate Neji?
But before answering those questions, bringo n the wonderful lemons ^^
This chapter really got me looking forward to them.
Thankies for the chapter!

Good chapter! Next one will be a lemon, right? Heheh:
Aww, Sasuke and Neji are such a sex machines, and I love it!
Hinata and Naruto makes a good couple too.
UPDATE SOON! I LOVE YOUR FIC !

This chapter was cute! I like it a lot, It was a nice chapter to read, how Hinata and Neji are getting back to each other and how Naruto is getting closer to Hinata and Sasuke keeping his love for Neji, adorable!