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for It's Always Been Us All

by xoxoxo

person Bounce
schedule June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this! *Pweaks* cant wait till the next chapter! I think I'd really like for them to be together though! As much as I want sakura and sasuke to pay for being such jackasses to naruto-kun, I already want to see the romance between them... Yep i love the lovey dovey crap. *Pweaks* Please update soon!
person Peal_Angel
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh god I cant believe how good this is going to be! I just know Im going to love this fanfiction the most of all the other threesomes! Its already sooooo good that im already so addicted to it and i cant wait until you update! Please dont let naruto be abused anymore he doesnt deserve it! You should make Sakura and Sasuke repent more and more for what they did to Naruto! Oh God I cant wait to see what happens next... and this Ako I hate her already. I loved the smut, but Naruto should be worried baout Sasuke! i arleady see him pulling out Ako's hair in his anger! --squeels-- I cant wait for the update and for them to interact more! god i love this i swear i havent read anything this good in such a long time and im scared that your just going to stop writing! Please dont this is so awesome and im so happy I found this fanfiction! I love this! thank you for writing it!

P.S. If you need a betta just e-mail me at PearI_Iangie@sbcglobal.net


Pearl_Angel
person jdc72011
schedule June 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the direction the story is going in and think that jumping right into the sex scenes with Naruto would be a bad idea. He's hurt emotionally and trying to sort out some of the shit, thats just hit the fan by the way, in his head. Keep the chapters coming.

jdc72011
person Anon
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! You updated! WHEE!

I'll have you know I check every night to see if the story is updated, and I always get so dissapointed when it isn't. So update soon, to save me from dissapointment, okay?

This was a good chapter. And don't worry, for me, I think the longer the better!
person plaawlod
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aw... I agree that he shouldn't jump right into things, but it would be nice for them to start making up soon... Continue Soon!
person RacerX78
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Seriously though naruto has every right to be like that. And what's their problem getting in his business, he left them alone didn't he. I hope Naruto is getting both Ako and Anko, man, lucky bastard. I hope you get a lot more into detail with Naruto, he should stay angry for awhile longer, and get his fair share of revenge on his so called teammates. What kind of friends are they attacking him when he tries to stay a way and tries to move on with his life. Bunch of greedy assholes if you ask me. Well hope you update soon. Don't make Naruto deter from his will, make him stand strong.
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's kind of ironic how sasuke and Sakura feel, when that was how naruto felt maybe even worse. But still naruto shouldn't relent he should make them suffer still. And come on a little smut with nar/ako/anko would be pretty good chapter heh heh. Nah but seriously I'm naruto fan, he doesn't deserve that crap, let naruto find better friends make him show sasuke and sakura that they need him more than he needs them. Naruto is the one that kept them together or shall I say is the one that keeps them sane. Let them fall apart. Naruto rocks!!! Let Naruto throw sakura on her ass out the door. It would be funny ako and anko come in when she gets thrown out. And anko says something like " well let's have some fun shall we, naruto clones please, hey pinky would you mind leaving, we have our man to satisfy." I don't know. Naruto needs all the love right now. Screw sasuke and sakura. Well erase that bit of what I said, but still naruto has suffered, let him return the favor.

CursedSeal: Naruto is so Hot(glomps on naruto [fangirl moment])

Naruto: what the hell woman get of me!
person ri100014
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS SO COMPLETELY TEENAGE DRAMA QUEEN BULLSHIT! BUT I LOVE IT!! Hahahahaa. Keep it up.

Till next time... adios.
person Himitsu
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woooow! I reallllllly like this fanfiction! Please keep it up! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!! :D
person Jin
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sakura and Sasuke need to suffer some more for what they did. They need to beg for forgivness. Update soon!