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May 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very well written so far, great job in expressing their thoughts and not cutting it off! I like your style, and Im very excited about where you're going with this. Keep up the good work. Please update soon... I want to know if Naruto's gonna get laid!
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May 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey it was a nice chapter. I can tell that its going to be long and thats good. I dont really like short stories i like it better when i have to keep reading... you get more into detail lik ethat. Well just wanted to say that i like the idea of naruto getting back at sakura-bitch and sasuke-bastard. They deserve a little ass kicking. I love where your going with this please keep it up and hopefully you update on this soon. I have a feeling this one is going to be one of the best team 7 threesome stories on this site so good luck
GL
GL
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An OC? That's an interesting twist. I wonder what you're planning for her. Update soon!
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
An OC? That's an interesting twist. I wonder what you're planning for her. Update soon!
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more please
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
happiness!!...i really like this story so far...i feel for Naruto especially with Sasuke being such a jackass...even though i like him too lol. i can't wait to see how Naruto will deal with those two...but even more importantly...this new girl?!!?...EXCITING!...do i hear jealousy coming up somewhere?? lol...keep up the good work!! ^-^!!
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really intrigued by this story. I've always thought how unfair it was that Naruto's friends never treated him as they should. Hopefully he can either meet someone who can appreciate him or his so called friends will finally start acting like real friends. Please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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April 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. So real. Feel sorry for Naruto. Love the Sakusasu pairing-Hope he doesn't break her heart again.
Rox
Rox
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April 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Make Naruto have more backbone! Hell, when he will come back from his mission he will show Sakura
and Sasuke and kick their asses...
and Sasuke and kick their asses...
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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww come on, continue. This is really interesting.