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for It's Always Been Us All

by xoxoxo

person Feion Phylar
schedule March 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man...I wanna see where this is going.

I hope Naruto tells their holds his ground and lets them have a piece of his mind. Let him give them a hard time? Pleeeasse? Make him distance himself and acts like nothing ever happened all cool like. Let them see he's not the little loud mouth boy he used to be. I personally feel it should be told from Sasuke and Sakura's veiw as they recognize the changes in their dobe. And just how sexy he is. Kee writing thought.
person Myself
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story, I'd like to read the next chapter! Please update and keep up the good work. =D
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
thank you can i have another XD....good job please update soon
person Jin
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sakura doesn't want Naruto to end up with a stupid bitch, huh? I guess that kicks her out of the running, eh? Seriously though, Naruto needs to come back and kick some ass, not necessarily in a literal sense mind you. Sakura and Sasuke both need at least a verbal lashing for the problem they created, and if Naruto can't do it then someone else needs to. It's necessary.

Truthfully, a large part of me hates this story, but it has nothing to do with the writing of it. In fact, it's written so well that I actually came back for more. It's just that I have a hard time tolerating angst. I feel tehe fear, anger, frustration, and depression as if it were my own. I hope things clear up a little in the next chapter or so for my own sanity's sake.

Update soon!
person TWISTED
schedule March 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WONDERIN WHEN U UPDATE
HOPE U DO ANOTHER SOON PLEASE SO MANY TWISTES
PLEASE UPDATE
person llyoung
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update. This is an interesting story.
person evilflynmonkeys
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm glad you updated, and hope for many more chapters to come,
or at least for you to finish, please update soon, your story rocks!!!
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmmm insteresting, eventhough sakura still seems a bit immature, its easy to simpathize with her. I wonder what will happen next.
person Drumanel
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is great. I can not wait to see what you have next. Please update soon.
person darkmousy
schedule March 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm curious for next chapter. i'm hoping we'll get sasuke's pov. i'm wondering where the story is going. update soon? =}