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July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
u might want to add more...seriously more sasuke and sakura love dovey...im pretty sure sasuke misses nailing her down the bed.
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"...Kill all the fags who don't agree.." nice title.
I can't desside if this story is really good or really sad...probable both...I hope it all turns out good. Poor, poor, naruto...*sigh* he needs a hug...4/5
I can't desside if this story is really good or really sad...probable both...I hope it all turns out good. Poor, poor, naruto...*sigh* he needs a hug...4/5
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March 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that's all it took to forgive them both especially sasuke? a blowjob? and it's sweet?! I get what you're trying to say seeing that sasuke is an absolute bastard and all doing that small thing like throwing his pride for minute but....I don't want to sound like a vehement bitch or something the like but where's the retribution?!
I mean, you spent your whole life being treated like shit, and gradually it grew marginally better then worse again because of being betrayed (multiple times)by the same people you care about, then your friends are doing that thing behind your back knowing that you have a crush to at least one of them without telling.....
Really, a blowjob is kinda you know ....not enough for me (sorry) to cover being treated like that for such a long time....considering what he has gone through um....isn't it more normal to have major trust issues? yes they were special to him but could you at least....make it more harder for them? I'm being silly I know, but there is something inside me crying for blood! revenge!!!! and eventual forgiveness and understanding to both parts....It just suck that naruto is the only one who continually gets hurt while the other two only gets confused at their own messed up relationship and feel just a tiny bit guilty (or not) about the whole fiasco.
I'm sorry, it's just that your story is so good and to have this kind of ending is a big disappointment to me so please don't get mad. Now if you could only do a sequel........?
I mean, you spent your whole life being treated like shit, and gradually it grew marginally better then worse again because of being betrayed (multiple times)by the same people you care about, then your friends are doing that thing behind your back knowing that you have a crush to at least one of them without telling.....
Really, a blowjob is kinda you know ....not enough for me (sorry) to cover being treated like that for such a long time....considering what he has gone through um....isn't it more normal to have major trust issues? yes they were special to him but could you at least....make it more harder for them? I'm being silly I know, but there is something inside me crying for blood! revenge!!!! and eventual forgiveness and understanding to both parts....It just suck that naruto is the only one who continually gets hurt while the other two only gets confused at their own messed up relationship and feel just a tiny bit guilty (or not) about the whole fiasco.
I'm sorry, it's just that your story is so good and to have this kind of ending is a big disappointment to me so please don't get mad. Now if you could only do a sequel........?
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March 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i'm completely in love with this story. i've read very few team 7 love fics that i've enjoyed as much as this one. can't wait for the next chapter.
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay- I loved it. Glad you fixed that chapter 15&16 glitch. Can't wait to read more.
Rox
Rox
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Somethings wrong... the chapter where all the fighting would have happened and stuff (how did they escape? what happened to lee and where is neji's hand?) is not present. Also, chapters 15 and 16 are exactly the same. Don't get me wrong, it was an excellent read both times around (heh, good chapter), but glitches must be fixed! ^^
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What happened to Chapter 15?? Now there are 2 Chapter 16s.
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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Can I just say that this story is freakin' amazing?! I love it! It's one of the first stories I've been this hyped up about recently, but I LOVE it to bits! I love all of the characters (except that lying b!tch Ako) but I think she was a crucial story point, so I'll allow it... j/k, j/k... THANKS SO MUCH FOR THIS! BUT OMG! I'M DYING HERE! Pleeeeeease tell me what happens next (or at least if Naru-chan and Sasu-chan get it oooooon ;) ) THANKS AGAIN FOR THE EXCELLENT STORY!
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Please please update soon. Holly crap what a cliff hanger, you smug SOB... This has really turned into a great story, I wasnt so sure about it at first but the action and the constant struggles and conflicts makes it irresistible dam it!
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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
your ending sucked, how could you end it like that *whiness* gwahh up date soon