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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omgi! Please update soon I love Sakura! HOw could you say you hate her?! WEll it doesnt matter long as you keep her with da three im good and please smut between team7 soon! Ja ne! ja ne! bakaakakakakakabakaakabakabakabkabakbakbaa!
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July 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
At least Sakura isn't selfish in the second half. But she's still oh so lovingly violent :D
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July 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This really makes me happy... I hate Sakura too by the way. I really wish that you would have made this chapter longer but i guess you really have been busy lately. Anwyay i hope you update sooner this time and hope the chapter is longer... I cant wait to see what happens when Sasuke finds out!
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your hate for Sakura doesn't really shoe . . . XD
Man, too short! I've been waiting FOREVER for an update! Ako's a liarrrrr!! Geez, I kind of started liking her.
. . . Hee hee, I want to see Sasuke and Sakura's faces when they find out all the stuff Naruto did with Ako XD
Man, too short! I've been waiting FOREVER for an update! Ako's a liarrrrr!! Geez, I kind of started liking her.
. . . Hee hee, I want to see Sasuke and Sakura's faces when they find out all the stuff Naruto did with Ako XD
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really, I can either hate or love Sakura depending on the story. That's part of what makes her character interesting. Given the right circumstances she can either be a source of pain or joy to Naruto. In this story she's a mixture of both, which probably resulted from the fact that while you hate Sakura, you still want her involved with the threesome. You've done a pretty good job portrying her emotions so far. Update soon!
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sakura has very little redeeming qualities. Its little wonder people hate her. At first, I didn't exactly hate her... sure, she was useless, and that offened my senseablities as a female, but I was waiting for her to step up to the plate and prove herself as an unexpected strenght. Then came the chuunin exams and Naruto and Sasuke were outcold and it was up to her to protect them. I was so excited at the prospect, only to be disappointed to discover that the only thing she managed to do was cut her hair. Bullshit! She should be a strong character in her own right, but the only thing she manages to do is let the boys handle the dangerous stuff and prove herself to be a worrying annoyance. That is why everyone hates her. Bitch.
Of course, I suppose I should be more on her side now that she's developed into a capible shinobi in the second half of the series after the time jump... but now she lacks personality. I don't know. The most enjoyable Sakura seems time and again to be the one found in fanfics, and that shouldn't be right at all. :/
Good chapter, btw.
Of course, I suppose I should be more on her side now that she's developed into a capible shinobi in the second half of the series after the time jump... but now she lacks personality. I don't know. The most enjoyable Sakura seems time and again to be the one found in fanfics, and that shouldn't be right at all. :/
Good chapter, btw.
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July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
:3 bwee im loving this fic so much~! i usually dont review but i really want to see where this goes so *!ENCOURAGEMENT!*
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July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well..i generally tend to avoid stories with original characters, but ako suits the plot nicely, so i'll just keep reading this.
well, she was an impostor even if we somehow suspected it since the begining. Now all there is to see is, whether she is or not a victim (i can predict her story being developed, untill her reaching a main character's level of importance...which is why i dont like new char/s blah blah *ranting goes on* ...but don't listen to me, you did fine till now)Hmmm..she is not the total omg!evil bitch, but neither the innocent type of victim...i dont know, i need at least one more chapter to get it clear.
what else?
oh, I wasn't expecting naruto to actually lose his verginity with her XDXD *gapes*(Naruto, you got the wrong person damnit! you love them and you know it, stop emo-ing about how life sucks and stand up..please!) wait, what am i saying, he needed to forget, i know. it couldn't be otherwise seeing the emotional situation of deep s##t he is in....but still, i'm used to his optimistic, merciful side...nghh *frustration* i love him for that! *crosses fingers for a happy ending*
by the way i enjoy when you describe scenes of 'madness'! XD yay, i dont know why, i'm so into psychologic suspence (like when naruto started laughing in the middle of fighting and made sasuke worry)because they convey strong emotions and you are there caring about the character, and you wonder 'what the hell is going on' and get scared, but then it's ok again and you relax. (dont overdo it though. they would look like actually crazy)I like sakura's hints of jealousy and possesiveness over naruto!
last thing: sasuke leaving for a mission and having only one day, or better say one night. HELL YEAH! a golden opportunity for fixing things and getting to the sex too XD(seize the day, my friend...) hurray for team7!
well, she was an impostor even if we somehow suspected it since the begining. Now all there is to see is, whether she is or not a victim (i can predict her story being developed, untill her reaching a main character's level of importance...which is why i dont like new char/s blah blah *ranting goes on* ...but don't listen to me, you did fine till now)Hmmm..she is not the total omg!evil bitch, but neither the innocent type of victim...i dont know, i need at least one more chapter to get it clear.
what else?
oh, I wasn't expecting naruto to actually lose his verginity with her XDXD *gapes*(Naruto, you got the wrong person damnit! you love them and you know it, stop emo-ing about how life sucks and stand up..please!) wait, what am i saying, he needed to forget, i know. it couldn't be otherwise seeing the emotional situation of deep s##t he is in....but still, i'm used to his optimistic, merciful side...nghh *frustration* i love him for that! *crosses fingers for a happy ending*
by the way i enjoy when you describe scenes of 'madness'! XD yay, i dont know why, i'm so into psychologic suspence (like when naruto started laughing in the middle of fighting and made sasuke worry)because they convey strong emotions and you are there caring about the character, and you wonder 'what the hell is going on' and get scared, but then it's ok again and you relax. (dont overdo it though. they would look like actually crazy)I like sakura's hints of jealousy and possesiveness over naruto!
last thing: sasuke leaving for a mission and having only one day, or better say one night. HELL YEAH! a golden opportunity for fixing things and getting to the sex too XD(seize the day, my friend...) hurray for team7!
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July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nuuuuuuuuuuuuuu you MUST write the next chapter!!! I loved it as usual, and I can't WAIT to see what happens, please continue!! :DDD
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update update update lol
seriously though this story is very good. its very well writing out and the stroy is interesting, with the exception of the naruto saske scene everything is very enoyable.
seriously though this story is very good. its very well writing out and the stroy is interesting, with the exception of the naruto saske scene everything is very enoyable.