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I must admit I've been very skeptical of this fic from the very beginning, but the way you continue deepening the plot and avoid the easy (cheap) solutions has really started to rope me in. I really don't think I was expecting Ako to be bad. It was weird because I *wanted* her to be, but it was a spiteful, how-dare-you-mess-with-team-seven kind of wish. And then bam! She's trouble. Trouble, trouble, trouble. The Sasuke chapter, by the way, was beautifully harsh. The absolute social inadequacy that Sasuke portrayed worked very well (even if it made me raise an eyebrow of "now how is the author going to realistically rebound the relationship from that??"). I honestly squirmed, it was such a painful scene to be a voyeur for. I've kept my eye on this fic just because the writing (and because I'm a sucker for team seven) and I now can say I've bitten your hook and getting reeled in awfully fast. Thank you for your dedication and hard work. I hope that I get to see a new chapter in the future.

The smut? She was good smut. And the betrayal... even better!


This was an excellent chapter. Short, but it accomplished eveything it needed to. I hope you take more inspiration from this chapter than you did the last when it comes to incentive updating. YOu gotta feel bad for Naruto; he finally lowers his guard and gets stabbed in the back. Great job with the chapter and keep up the good work!

AWWWW man! I was kind of starting to like Ako! Poor Naruto!!! You've got to update, ASAP! Okay??

Oh, and nice lemon ^_~

I saw this twist coming...well, mostly I did. I didn't suspect Anko's part in Ako's plans or the fact that Ako was Sasori's puppet (and is that in a literal or figurative sense? With Sasori you could probably go either way), but it was still very good. Well written.

Update soon!

Omg great last chapter! I really loved the betrayal but hated it at the same time! 0how can she do that to poor naru-chan?! HE was so nice to her and he really liked her! Sakura needs to beat the shit out of her.! And I Know that was Sassori right? Oh gods i love sassori and dei! I love this so much please continue asap! The faster the more you get reviews so update!

Great job so far! I don't usually patronize stories with OCs, but I've liked this one from the beggining and the intricate way you wove her into the storyline just made it better. I 'm really looking forward to seeing where this one is going, so please continue! Ganbate!

Your story is really starting to cook. I can't wait to see what Sakura's reaction to Sasuke leaving the village will be after her encounter with Naruto. Will there be an ItaSasu pairing as well? What is going to happen to Neji & Lee while they are in the hands of the Akatsuki? I can't wait to find out. Please update soon.

I absolutely love this... I dont knwo how many time si can say that! You know we love it, please update soon!

That was AMAZING! PLEASE update! I absolutely LOVED this chapter, Sasuke's POV was so beautifully done. Keep it up! =)

Wow this is one kick ass story, nice work.