rate_review Reviews

you did a great job with this story

If it was up to me, I would always review at the end of the story. Because can we honestly tell if a story is good or not if we have not read its entirety, I mean a story can have good parts, ( which by the way all the chapters so far have been near chocolatey awesome not orgasmic yet, but we are getting eventually to the main point. I do feel this story would have been better read as a whole. Having to wait for each chapter is draining. Then again, I'm not very patient. haha, anyway I'll probably come back to read the next chapter, If i can handle the wait.

Ahhh!! Ahhh! So good! I think you're right, Naruto could have gotten out if he REALLY wanted to ^_~

Hehehe, I loved this chapter. It sent tinlgies down my spine :o

Update soon, okay? SOON, DAMMIT, SOON!

I'm reviewing just because i didn't wanna to know what you were gonna do if i didn't!!!!!!!!! but it was a good chappie!!

id be really happy if there was more ch cause its good

40 seconds well worth it. I seriously love where you've been going with this story and I love the angst on all sides, hopefully leading up to a very satisfying conclusion. Though of that I have no doubt. I know how hard it is to finish a chapter but I can't stop myself from saying "Update soon!!!" I know, heard enough times, but your story is awesome and I want more. More I say!!! LOL! Good job!

This is so great. You'd be amazed that their really arent that many threesomes between team 7. I'm so glad I found this, and hopefully you will see it thruough to the end. I'm really so sad that Sakura didn't push herself on Naruto. Sure he needs space but he probably would have seen how much she really cares for him if she pushed herself onto him a little bit harder. In my opinion she gave up too soon. She really didn't try to have sex with him... but then again she's probably just as confused as Naruto is at her own actions. But you're doing a wonderful job. I love where this is going. I'll keep checking for updates.

Excellent story. I always wanted to see Naruto finally snap...he deserves so much more than what he gets. A nice guy that gets stepped all over...I know how he feels. Please write more.

That was wonderful. I LOVED it. PLEASE, PLEASE continue!! You have no idea how happy I am every time there's a new chapter. ^_^ Keep it up!

Awesome. But, each time a new character starts talking it is supposed to start a new paragraph. =p 'makes it easier to read.