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April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey brilliant story so far , hope yoou get the oppertunity to continue it i am sure we are all waiting with baited breath :P
Oni~K
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Oni~K
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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter four
For some reason, I thought it was a rather turdish thing for Naruto to do to fight Lee and further more disrespect him by not taking off the weights (and even to test out his abilities). You'd think Naruto would know what it was like to be underestimated, and since Lee is one of those ninja who don't have seals or bloodlines and works only off his own motivation and from hard work he'd respect that more :( (further more he seems to be one of the least respected ninja, so he's almost in the same boat). It almost makes me dislike Naruto, and I really don't want to since the premise of this story is interesting... But he's almost too boastful for me to even sympathize when the villagers are being cruel to him.
Aaah, overcome, Lee T_T. You can do it.
For some reason, I thought it was a rather turdish thing for Naruto to do to fight Lee and further more disrespect him by not taking off the weights (and even to test out his abilities). You'd think Naruto would know what it was like to be underestimated, and since Lee is one of those ninja who don't have seals or bloodlines and works only off his own motivation and from hard work he'd respect that more :( (further more he seems to be one of the least respected ninja, so he's almost in the same boat). It almost makes me dislike Naruto, and I really don't want to since the premise of this story is interesting... But he's almost too boastful for me to even sympathize when the villagers are being cruel to him.
Aaah, overcome, Lee T_T. You can do it.
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January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
the story is good but you might want to have someone look it over because the grammer is a little off. so is the spelling. I don't know if english is your first language or not but the bad grammer is the only thing really wrong with the story.
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July 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
!!!! DAMN....
actually, this is the first time i've read your story, i like it, and plus, you have all the nice little twists and plots tha tmake it better. i do want to know what happens between sasuke and naruto.
I've noted that you don't seem to update often? i will try and keep an eye out for your story, as that is the case. thanks for writing this though! Good luck!
actually, this is the first time i've read your story, i like it, and plus, you have all the nice little twists and plots tha tmake it better. i do want to know what happens between sasuke and naruto.
I've noted that you don't seem to update often? i will try and keep an eye out for your story, as that is the case. thanks for writing this though! Good luck!
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha.. LOSER!! Who's dead last now, Uchiha? >:)
hehehe Welcome back!
(Unrelated to the story, but what did you get your doctorate on?)
hehehe Welcome back!
(Unrelated to the story, but what did you get your doctorate on?)
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July 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha.. LOSER!! Who's dead last now, Uchiha? >:)
hehehe Welcome back!
(Unrelated to the story, but what did you get your doctorate on?)
hehehe Welcome back!
(Unrelated to the story, but what did you get your doctorate on?)
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November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I love this story. I can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Goddamnit! Why are you leaving us hanging like that! It's not fair!
-Damp *cries in her corner*
-Damp *cries in her corner*
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aw man what a horrible place to end well i love it and i can't wait for the next chapter
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October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do not review a lot. Mainly because I suck at it. I love this story and have not seen it around for a while. But love is not what made me do it. This is, "HOWEVER!: Reviews or no reviews, I will finish the story." I cannot stand it when a story is held hostage, the authors who say they will pull the story or not update unless they get so many reviews piss me off. I thought people who wrote did it because they loved it and wanted to share it, not get their egos stroked. I understand wanting constructive reviews I E Help if the story has problems. But yours has none that I could possibly help with, me not being a writer but a reader. So heres your messed up review. Thanks for a good read.