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It's a bit weird. I personally like stories that are closer to the actual anime (why the red hair?). But it's definetely interesting. Good Job! :P

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Wait...something's off here...WHY ISN'T NARUTO GOING AFTER THE REAL ORICHIMARU??!!! WHY ISN'T NARUTO RESCUEING HIS SASUKES?? What are you planning kouga kitsune!? Well obviously you're not going to tell me...but hey it was worth a shot (you just wasted my energy!!)

so the person who was watching naruto was his younger brother nice cliffie. is naruto going to have other younger siblings or is the brother the only one. why didn't they come and get him earlier. is the "kit" that's inside of him really someone else or is it his mother who lost her memories and powers as a result of being sealed. so many questions can't wait for the update tofind the answers. great chapter by the way.

What's happening in Konoha and what about Sasuke? Hurry with the next chapter!!!

WHY ARE THERE EXPLOSIONS?!?!?!? GAHHHHHHHHH MORE MORE MORE!

eehhh?? a cliffhanger?! i want to know what will happen between them!!

But what of Sasuke? What's going to happen to him?

I wonder what the explosion was. Yet again, you're such a tease. :p

"Naruto looked doubtfully at his brother, still not trusting him completely, for they had just met! And brothers can’t always be trusted, look at Itachi." HAHA!! That is SO TRUE!!God I wonder who was the idiote that decided to make Konoha go BOOM! DAMN YOU!! I hate it when authors decide to leave a cliffie!! Although it's fun to do that when YOU'RE the author and you know what's going to happen XD!! Nice work I LOVE the outfit you gave Naruto...it was better then Sasuke's...(If you think I'm bad mouthing again...SCREW YOU!! And besides you know Naruto is a better looker then Sasuke XD and it's too troublesome when it comes to making Sasuke a better looker then NARUTO!! 'Cuz you know it's impossible!!)