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for Kaleidoscope

by nekochannya

person a kitsunes light
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it but cmon please, you hate sakura that much, it's ok she doesnt have to be an angel, she must be important for this story but please not another rape, maybe just fruitless atempts. Sorry if that changes your idea too much forget it
Anyway I really liked this fic too, and cant wait to see Naruto in it!!!!
person Saiou-chan
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sasu/Naru!
person chocochoco
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Sakura, I'd love to see a happy ending for her, I've always thought she was a good character, though misguided. I hope Sasuke is finally able to get out of his cycle of revenge and live happily with Naruto. Maybe they'll even adopt a daughter and live happily ever after ^^ Eep I'm such a sucker for happy endings! Hee hee interesting story, I'd love to see it go somewhere :P
person AubreyWitch
schedule February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, it took me so long to respond. I don't check in here that often. There doesn't seem to be a response option to reviews, but since you requested to know if my story "We Intertwined" would be updated or not, I'm leaving a review to answer your question. ^_^ Yes, I do plan to update, but it hasn't been received all that well, so it kind of ended up on the back burner (that and I'm swamped this semester). I like the idea of a threesome but I'm not really overly attached to any pairing within it other than Naru/Saku (which doesn't seem too popular in this fandom!) so don't get offended if I switch it up in the next few chapters. I've already gotten complaints because Naruto was the bottom or because there was Sasu/Saku action, etc. But really I feel like trying all combinations within the triangle for this fic. (Just to warn you.) Thanks for the review!
person Angel
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it! I like it alot! But.....Sakura must die. Getting in the way of Sasuke and Naruto! The hoe....I swear if I was in this story I would kill her in cold blood and laugh the whole whay through......

But it's so good! It has a great plot and wording. (Even if Sakura is pshcotic......and a bitch)

Please update soon,

~Angel
person darkgod99
schedule December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yet again the, pink-haired bitch interveanes in everything. She is truely annoying.
As for the pairings, go Sasuke/Naruto, all the way! This looks like an interesting story. Update soon.
person not logged in
schedule December 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice job i really like it. it seems like this is leaning more towards sasunaru but i think sometime u should do an itasasu. sakuras such an annoying bitch :P she needs to quit being so obsessive.
person Mel
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I definately think that you should continue. Sasuke/Naruto is a good pairing. But please don't make Sakura a completely horrible person. Maybe her spirit guide needs to knock some sense into her. I would like Sakura paired with Kakashi, Gaara, or Lee. I hope this helps. I can't wait for the next chapter.
person redtatsu
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Yes more chapters would be nice. Sasuke and Naruto as pairings would make it even BETTER. I like the idea you have as those two as reicarnated lovers. Is Sakura reicarnated too?
person sasunarulover62
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey i think you shouldgo with sasunaru